Brain Tumbling Ideas

I do

Do you 
 shock 
your brain
 into 
deep freezing?
When you 
 lick up
the reasoning
 in 
morbid ideas?

Do you
 race
your brain
 into
tangled breezes?
When you
 roll with
the reasoning
 in
frenzied ideas?

Do you
 display
your brain
 into
expensive retail?
When you
 order up
the reasoning
in
action alley ideas?

Do you 
 squeeze
your brain
 into
cresting sexuality?
When you
 brush 
the reasoning
 in 
maturing ideas?

Do you
 shop
your brain
 into
Walmart.com?
When you
 peruse 
the reasoning
 in
seasons ideas?

I do

Do you?
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October 28, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Perfect read for me this early morn since my brain won't stop percolating, very cool. Fittingly, make mine Amazon.com. :)
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November 4, 2016 at 4:00 PM
miss lovely..poetess. thank you very much. retail therapy...some times inspires artistry.
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October 26, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Well you threw me off with brain, I've been told mine doesn't always work like it should. :) I really liked this Holly, quite abstract but definitely "thought" provoking.
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October 26, 2016 at 7:56 PM
I'm experimenting with abstract art painting. I think it's spilling over in my writing.....thanks chris
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