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Brain Storm

Clouding my thoughts you drive my imagination wild I guess you could say you give me "wild thoughts" I'm trying to pull myself out of this whirlwind of bliss. It's great but I must get back to reality. i'm Dorthy and you're my Oz. you're the kerosene that fuels my fire and this is way too hot to handle. I'm living in a sea of emotion and I know i'm gonna drown. I do this all time, when am I going to learn? I wish i could calm this storm in my brain. I feel it will make me insane, and you already drive me crazy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/20/2017 2:33:00 PM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup, with your first great poem Violette - // S.S. :)
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Date: 11/20/2017 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic expressions, Violetta. Such a sensual debut poem, wonderful metaphors. Excellent poetry. Welcome to PSoup ... your talented pen is greatly appreciated. May love light your path always.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/20/2017 9:28:00 AM
Btw ... who could not but love a poetess w/such an exotic name. Much love from the Romantic Warrior to Ms. Lady Love. Love and peace forever.
Date: 11/18/2017 12:09:00 PM
Great first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Violetta Love
Date: 11/18/2017 9:41:00 PM
Thank you!

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