Brain Storm

Clouding my thoughts
you drive my imagination wild 
I guess you could say you give me "wild thoughts"
I'm trying to pull myself out of this whirlwind of bliss.
It's great but I must get back to reality.
i'm Dorthy and you're my Oz.
you're the kerosene that fuels my fire
and this is way too hot to handle. 
I'm living in a sea of emotion and I know i'm gonna drown. 
I do this all time, when am I going to learn?
I wish i could calm this storm in my brain. 
I feel it will make me insane, and you already drive me crazy.
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Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 2:33 PM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup, with your first great poem Violette - // S.S. :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Beautiful, romantic expressions, Violetta. Such a sensual debut poem, wonderful metaphors. Excellent poetry. Welcome to PSoup ... your talented pen is greatly appreciated. May love light your path always.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Btw ... who could not but love a poetess w/such an exotic name. Much love from the Romantic Warrior to Ms. Lady Love. Love and peace forever.
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November 18, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Great first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Love Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Thank you!
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