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Brain Freeze

Absolutely anything - the best thematic shot, What an opportunity to one entangled plot! I racked my true detective brain, All trains of thought ran overstrain, Limerick that lacks a story substance all I got. Contest: Absolutely Anything Sponsor: Shreya LN January 23, 2022

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John Gondolf

Date: 1/26/2022 4:18:00 AM

A great job of putting together absolutely nothing, Maggie. I need to take note, I haven't had much lately. Hope all is well in the great North. Hugs.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 1/25/2022 2:57:00 PM

For certain, substance deserves a nice prize too! Just don't gulp frozen Mountain Dew, I heard it'll turn your brain cells into glue! A little humor...I think. I like your style M.L. Cheerio!...ab

Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2022 6:02:00 PM

I like yours :) Cheers!