Braille

As an appendage to my life's story as I sail Will certainly be a very long tail (oops... tale!) Also climbed Mt. Everest Got to the top, beat my chest Then fell to the bottom, now read braille

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/7/2017 8:46:00 AM

I assume your sudden descent//made a very large dent//in Nepal//and your fall//is a documented event. CLIMB ON SIR EDMUND HILLARY JACKSON!!! (able sidekick T. Norgay here)

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2017 9:32:00 AM

You are old like me remembering his sidekick Tenzing!!! What great minds we own!!! SIR HILLARY SIGNING OFF!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/7/2017 7:56:00 AM

Did you land on the back of your head? That's where your sight is located! Have you ever hit your head from the back and seen stars? That's from your sight being distorted, rigamorted, and divatorgted...what? divatorgted?? Never mind that, Awesome poem my friend! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2017 8:03:00 AM

HUH??? You have dazzled me with your growed up words Sir Russell!!!

Silent One

Date: 11/7/2017 7:13:00 AM

Awwww.... Poor Jack.... Is this the Jack and Jill analogy, but instead of breaking your crown, you are no blind? LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2017 7:27:00 AM

So you saw the connection!!! Can you read this, I'm typing by memory!