Braided Beauty

She exudes a Mona Lisa like mystique
 With a beauty beguiled by Medusa's locks
 There is no smile of which to speak
 That image the imagination can't block

 She has closed the windows to her soul
 With an expression of a broken heart
 Yet she remains calm and in control
 No tears of sorrow does she impart

 Will she ever find love again
 A sweet caress, or tender kiss
 Or is it all just in vain
 To find a love to give her bliss
 
 I only wish I knew her name
 So I could sing her a serenade
 I'll call her Eva just the same
 The beautiful girl with lovely braids.
                       --
   8/4/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Simply beautiful, Joseph.
J.T. Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Very nice -JT
May Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 5:59 AM
Thank you JT
Ashley Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Hi Joseph, an amazing interpretation of the portrait and a gorgeous poem. Congratulations on your win!
May Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Susan
Roper Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Joseph , I love the emotion you've placed in this nice well-crafted poem. Congratulations on your win. ~*
May Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Thank you for my placement Eve..
Sands Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Congratulations on your win Joseph :)
May Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Heidi
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Oh is this for the lovely picture of Eve's? I bet she will love this entry if it is. WELL DONE, my friend!!
May Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:48 AM
Thank you Andrea..hugs
Daniel Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 12:07 AM
Wow, that was nice! Eve is sure to love this one, Joseph:) I do:)
May Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:47 AM
Thank you Jo :-)
B. Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 7:09 PM
Aww this really tugs at the heart strings. Very touching. :)
May Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:46 AM
Thank you Carol
Sands Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Nicely done Joseph! Good luck in the contest :)
May Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Heidi..
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