Boy Is It Cloudy

a cotpit viewing
altitude eight hundred feet
cloud coverage below





Tribute To Flying High LOL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 2, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Dear Katherine, Great Tribute Perfect Haiku I am reading YOU again sorry I sort of went on a sabbtical with the POETS I started when I first came to the SOUP I've missed YOU LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Duhart Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 6:22 AM
I know that's right. That is why I like to stick to the ground. Great write.
White Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 11:55 AM
hi Katherine, Ihope that you have been well, a light-heated write, ful of impending doom, take care D-nyce
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March 29, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Nice use of imagery. You have a gift for saying much in a few words. Enjoyed this one. Blessings to you for sharing it. Have a good day my friend. Karen
Devonshire Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Nice perspective on rising above the clouds and seeing them below. This great poem can be seen from another point of view as well!
Winter Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Fear of flying here. Although you cannot deny the beauty from above. Except when it's too cloudy! Cute title! Love, Shar
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March 29, 2009 at 7:11 AM
really cute haiku! and yea a great tribute! ~ Arany
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