Boy

Bold like the break of dawn 
Bikes are ridden all morn
Boogers and dirt adorn
Baseball all afternoon
Bonding under the moon
Beauty, transfixed they swoon
Boy, don’t grow up too soon

8/16/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/6/2016 6:32:00 AM
Tom, great poem! excellent :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 9/6/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thanks, Luloo!
Date: 8/21/2016 12:45:00 PM
You did an excellent job with this one, Tom! We know what it's like...been there:) Congrats on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/21/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 8/20/2016 10:49:00 AM
So well written, enjoyed the read, congrats on a fine win!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 8/20/2016 8:59:00 AM
Tom, a great 'boy, poem and congratulations on your Second Place podium win! Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 8/20/2016 7:37:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 8/20/2016 4:11:00 AM
How charming Tom! Congratulations on your top placement! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 8/20/2016 2:48:00 AM
Back to congratulate on a worthy win:) Congratulations:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Date: 8/19/2016 8:58:00 PM
Loved it. First picture looks like the Little Rascals. Congratulations Tom...
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 8/19/2016 7:40:00 PM
Tom, this was a fabulous write! Your third line had me laughing. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:44:00 AM
Makes me wonder if you have boy(s)...:-) Thanks, Kim!
Date: 8/19/2016 12:17:00 PM
Great write, Tom (I'm sure the Pleiades sisters love it). Took me back, too! ;-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 8/17/2016 10:01:00 PM
wow, I love what you did with BOY. One of my favorites of the B groups!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/20/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 8/17/2016 12:45:00 PM
ohhh, boy... you charm me with this pleiades, tom.. i missed entering; it closed already... huggs
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Date: 8/17/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Nette! I was second to last...made myself do it before bed, otherwise I would've gotten skunked.
Date: 8/17/2016 8:36:00 AM
That's right Tom don't grow up too soon. Brings back great memories.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/17/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thanks, Tim! Pretty good summation of my kidhood in 42 syllables. :-)
Date: 8/17/2016 8:35:00 AM
Boy, you said a mouthful! You could've written another 7 lines had you needed to. Great subject, Tom. Thanks for the smile!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/17/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel! Glad you liked.
Date: 8/17/2016 2:02:00 AM
I especially loved the final line Tom:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/17/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 8/17/2016 1:54:00 AM
Very nice write on boys, Tom:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/17/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 8/17/2016 1:17:00 AM
A very good B boy poem x GL in the contest x
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/17/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy!
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