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BOXING DAY BLUES a hiku sonnet

shorts,white socks
sandals and panama-
winter-white legs

no wind,blue skies
dozing in a deckchair-
my afternoon tea stews

hottest day of summer
flying ants on high-
a swallows' drive by

summer-days ever-lasting
memories so tender-tasting
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 6:55 AM
What a lovely write, Brian! A fave!
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