Boxed In

“Normality is a paved road: It’s comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it." Vincent Van Gogh


They tell you ‘Think outside the box’
So, ponder well, pull up your socks
Avoid the danger of clichés, 
Don’t overdress with mayonnaise
Explore what lies beyond the rules
Create your own poetic tools 
Delve in each corner of the mind
Where inspiration you will find.
Illumination ~ thump of fist:
That’s it! Eureka! What a twist!

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Buzzwords Poetry Contest
Hosted by Kim Rodrigues
         Placed 2nd
© 18th January, 2022

funrhyme

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/23/2022 5:20:00 PM

Paul, in my mind, you could not have said it better if you tried to nail jelly to a fence.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2022 10:52:00 AM

Thank you, Wendy :) It's been a while since I last heard that idiom! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2022 2:32:00 AM

I am happy to see this on the winner’s list Paul. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 3/13/2022 12:06:00 AM

Thank you dear Connie. I am also pleased to see your entry on the winners' list. Warm regards and blessings // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2022 12:34:00 PM

A funny one, Paul! Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/12/2022 11:53:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/29/2022 9:54:00 AM

Excellent play with Buzzwords, Paul. I love the advice to delve into each corner of the mind. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 11:42:00 AM

Thank you for your pleasant feedback, Suz. Lovely to see you posting again. Hope life is treating you well, my friend. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 1/24/2022 9:00:00 AM

Very nicely penned Paul, best wishes in the Contest

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. So far the contest has not been judged, but your wishes are appreciated. Regards // paul

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/23/2022 4:44:00 PM

Enjoyed, Well written... Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 10:30:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Debra...thank you. Blessings // paul

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/23/2022 12:00:00 PM

Great pen Paul, really good imagery and insightful expression too. How's winter in Malta? It's really getting colder here in Scotland. Take care always,Gordon

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 10:32:00 AM

Thank you, Gordon. So far winter is better than expected; in fact we've been having lovely sunny weather, though the temperature goes down at night. Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/22/2022 7:29:00 PM

My favorite line is this: "Think outside the box." It's so wonderful. :) I know this to be true, because I do it all the time. There is another thought that held my attention: "Avoid the danger of clichés." Wise words indeed, my dear sweet friend. Once again, you have created a Masterpiece. Keep thinking outside the box, because I enjoy when you scribble outside the lines. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 10:35:00 AM

I do enjoy your pleasant visits and words of encouragement, Brandy :) Thank you for stopping by with a smile. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/22/2022 6:49:00 AM

This is brilliant Paul! Well done :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2022 11:14:00 AM

Glad you like it, Heidi! Thank you! Regards // paul

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/22/2022 6:25:00 AM

You are very good for short poems. I'm not unfortunately. This is a perfect example and wish you a high rating. Victor

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2022 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Victor. I hope you are keeping well. Best regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/21/2022 10:23:00 PM

A recipe of clever poetry. Love this. Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Best regards // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/21/2022 2:21:00 PM

Perfect rhyme in time … I love it and the passion behind it ! I love the last line as well as delve in each corner of the mind where inspiration you will find ! Hugs to you my friend , Susan :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thank you for, yet again, another enjoyable and pleasant visit, Susan. Your feedback is always appreciated. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2022 7:19:00 AM

- ... this is how it should sound, Paul :) - Excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 6:09:00 AM

Thank you for the "excellent" and faith you show in this humble poem of mine, Anne-Lise! Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2022 6:27:00 AM

Enjoyed your little poem, Paul:) very clever indeed:)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 6:04:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. Glad you enjoyed :) Best regards // paul

Anil Deo

Date: 1/20/2022 3:28:00 AM

Yet positivity throughout ( I tried recently, but my metpoem was far from POS+). Thx for good example.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 6:00:00 AM

Thank you for a welcome sincere visit, Anil. Unfortunately I don't always follow my own recommendations! :) Best regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 10:00:00 AM

Wow Paul….I will bet this is exactly what she had in mind when creating this contest. Your clever entry should come in at the top or real close. Brilliant! Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 5:56:00 AM

You are too kind, my friend :) Thank you! ~ Warm regards // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2022 6:12:00 PM

I love how this write totally blasted off at the end! Knocked my socks off, gw

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon! Glad you enjoyed it. Best regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2022 5:15:00 PM

WoW! Paul, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It’s look a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a good evening-Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 12:48:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely reaction, Alexis! Your wishes are also appreciated. So far the new year is being kind to me :) Best regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/18/2022 12:00:00 PM

Wonderful write. Love it. A sure winner. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 12:22:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments and faith you show in my poem, Gina. Warm regards & blessings // paul

John Lawless

Date: 1/18/2022 8:31:00 AM

sounds like a millennial version of the "how do you get the goose out of the bottle" poser

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 12:11:00 PM

Still chuckling at your pleasant comment, John :) Thank you for stopping by. ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/18/2022 7:42:00 AM

Hope you are enjoying 2022 so far, my good poetic friend. Hello & how have you been? Here, I am making a stop on poetry soup. :) Paul, I'm just glad you figured it out all by yourself. That is why I do the opposite of everything. I'm just weird like that. By the way, I love the ending. As always, never disappointed. You know me, I had to look you up, before I head out. All is well, have a wonderful day. Smile and say hi, when you have the chance. Always LOVE LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 1/31/2022 12:03:00 PM

Hi Linda! It's good to have you stopping by; I told you once that I keep the kettle simmering just in case you visit on impulse :) Your long hiatus left a big void on Soup. Hope all is well on your side of the river. (I still follow Royale elsewhere). Hugs // paul