Box and Trap

my friend Fox
build box
another friend, Cap
produces trap
if Fox was a cap
and Cap was Fox,
every box would be a trap,
and every trap would be a box...!

Based on a Brazilian poem by Lopes and Lucas, author unknown...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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October 7, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Really interesting Alkas, how this poem becomes a box in a trap, and a trap in a box. You mention Lopes and Lucas... Is that Rodrigo Garcia Lopes? Who is the Lucas? Thanks Alkas. Abrazos
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October 7, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Jeff,Lopes and Lucas just random names to rhyme for me.author unknown... poem sans name salute, alkas
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