Vanja Veleva Poet ABC

Box 4

BOX (4)

I let the voice 
recognize the box
but it sits opposite me
		chewing my echo.

I stare around.
	I am inside it.
The echo bounces against its walls
piercing my ear 
like an earring.

My voice giggles into tears
and stands here
	stuck, to remind me
	that the box is stifling me
	the more I grow
	inside it.

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Beata Agustin November 1, 2024 at 8:07 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 4:30 PM Vanja, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 1:52 PM Vanja, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Debbie Guzzi January 9, 2013 at 6:47 PM Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 8, 2013 at 7:00 AM Hi there and welcome to the site, I hope you enjoy it here.

Victoria Anderson-Throop January 7, 2013 at 3:34 PM I like the imagery-- The echo bounces against its walls piercing my ear like an earring nicely done.... nice to meet you!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2013 at 12:23 PM Vanja, welcome to P-Soup. - You write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Happy new year. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)