Bow-Legged Pete

There once was a lanky cowpoke named Pete,

Who, when he walked got tangled in his feet!

He'd spent years ridin' his horse,

Becomin' bow-legged, of course!

Looked like a pair of pliers pacin' the street!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Carrillo Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Nice poem Robert. I guess all cowboys in Texas are Bow - legged. They just have to do it the cowboy way. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 9:38 AM
'...like a pair of pliers,' excellent simile! A very entertaining LIMERICK with fine flow and perfect rhyming. BRAVO Bob!! Best wishes, Keith
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
Harrell Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Lol, I can just imagine what he looks like when he walks. I don't want to laugh but it is a funny sight in my mind. Love it, Bob! Enjoyed :)
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Super limerick, and very funny. - Always nice to read your pearls Bob. - Have a lovely weekend. - Big hug / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 10:59 PM
CUTE one, Robert!!
Gorelick Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 8:20 PM
You made my day with this little piece. A laugh is what I needed. BG
Merryman Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 7:03 PM
Cute limerick, Bob! I love your sense of humor. Love, KIm
Sivey Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Ha ha ha, this is a very funny write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful and humorous poem this evening! What a fun loving piece, Great Work!!
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