Andrea Dietrich Poet Alliteration

Bountiful Berries Bring Bliss

Beauti-licous boy -
brawny, blushing blackberry -
Banquet for big bites!
Bare yourself; bedevil me.
Be bad, Boy, and make me beg.

Rare raspberry rogue -
recipe I can’t resist;
revelry’s repast!
Rattle me. . . Then ravish me.
Rambunctious rascal. . . . No regrets!

Gentlemanly grape -
Berry that grows gracefully -
Good for the gourmet!
Generous, gallant, gentile.
Gaze on me, and go. . . . .slowly.

My sweet seducer,
I savor strawberry scent
sinful. . . sensuous.
Shiver me beneath silk sheets.
As you saunter off, I’ll sigh.

Bodacious berries -
from blue to boysenberry;
from bashful to bold,
and from breakfast to bed time. . . 
Bountiful berries bring bliss.

For Linda Marie's "Luscious Love LLingers" Alliteration Contest

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Phyllis Babcock March 22, 2011 at 4:23 PM It is a luscious poem and I will take the S's and find those silk sheets you speak off. They sound a bit like hubby , a sweet seducer. ha ha love phyl

Cas Davis October 3, 2010 at 9:12 AM Ahhh, so u'r LLL entry was a wee bit rambunctious, too, huh? Very nice alliteration, Andrea!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 16, 2010 at 12:29 AM yup-- haha I actually entered that other write first-- unveiled-- but I also liked proof so I was torn between the two so decided to just enter them both, lol fickle me-- but I do agree with you about proof ;) -- anyhow yiikes you should sleep_- I was just replying to your email not yet done ;) -- ttyl you should sleep!! you're gonna end up like me sleeping at 3am O_o hugs btw that was a super fun blog ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 16, 2010 at 12:17 AM ooh wee I haven't congratulated you on this one yet! So belated congrats :)-- & you are still awake?? uh-oh!! Thanks btw for your comments in my senryu-- I believe that he accept multiple senryu-- Linda asked him in his blog I think and he said it's ok-- :) hugs to you :)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 9, 2010 at 11:06 AM Congratulations Andrea on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol

Constance La France September 7, 2010 at 9:41 PM Congratulations Andrea on you win in Linda;s conteast with this lovely poem.. Love Constance

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 6, 2010 at 7:37 AM Congrats Andrea on your big win in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write and super win.. enjoy this holiday ... with luv..

Kris Walters September 1, 2010 at 6:10 PM Wowsa! This is awsome! Not only great alliteration but wonderful sensual imagery too! Very fun to read :D hugs, Kris

Connie Marcum Wong August 31, 2010 at 3:20 PM Wow Andrea, this one will be hard to top! Luscious and lascivious! Great entry Andrea. Aloha, Connie

Michael J. Falotico August 29, 2010 at 5:33 AM I agree with all the below comments...A wondeful gem for this contest...love Michael

Matthew Anish August 28, 2010 at 9:06 PM Sexy berries indeed! Tasty write! Berries are sooo sweet! Love Matthew

Kaila B.A August 28, 2010 at 9:00 PM Beautiful poem i love berrries!!!i never heard of boysenberry!! never had it though! wanna try it ~ hehe not really, i have been moving around middle east and asia but for the past 8years..I'm stable in Japan :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 27, 2010 at 7:41 PM thankxxx for supporting my contest Andrea..good luck..with luv..

Doris Culverhouse August 27, 2010 at 7:39 PM enjoyed reading!! I love the berries and just every thing. I wrote a lmerick for the lawyer contest. If you care to read it.

Lynette Chachere August 26, 2010 at 4:06 PM sounds like an irresistable attraction. beauti-licious boy? yeah but does he have a nice butt that you can slap every once and a while? just to add on to the bliss. . jk.good luck. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels August 26, 2010 at 4:03 AM Wow, can I just say Wow again? Andrea love this.. a excellent entry for Linda's contest.. ;) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire August 25, 2010 at 10:37 PM Hon, I'm really not impatient. People just seem to write the limericks quickly. I usually wait at least 24 hours after one of my contests closes before posting winners. Now it will probably take longer because there are more entries required. It took me a lot of time to write my couplet for the dog contest. I tried to write a limerick for it first, but it was lame. Enjoy that waterpark pass! I can't go swimming now because the lesion was removed Monday, so I'm a bit jealous! Love you, CD

Poet Destroyer A August 25, 2010 at 10:08 PM good entry for the contest Andrea, enjoyed and good luck on the contest..P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire August 25, 2010 at 10:03 PM Regarding your blog comment, Andrea, contests will close when the maximum number of entries (35 in this case) is reached. It can then be locked and judged. There is no rush to judge it. I only posted the blog because entries were coming in quickly and I wanted to keep members updated. I've had 28 entries in two days. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire August 25, 2010 at 9:33 PM Excellent, Andrea! I think she will like the assortment of berries and they way you relate them to romance. The alliteration seems right on target. It doesn't come easy to me, but it is a fun form to employ. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta August 25, 2010 at 8:07 PM Very interesting write and a nice entry for the contest, Andrea. Good luck