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Bountiful and Careless

Nature is as careless as it is bountiful The faster the death, the faster is evolution. I, a female gnat, eat my own fertile eggs, When I am hungry while laying the eggs, We, the gnats produce eggs within our body, When I am hatched within the body I devour my own parents. The parents die, the next generation lives. The sea is a cup of death And land is a stained alter stone. I am the fortunate survivor Living on flotsam and jetsam. Right or wrong is a human concept. The nature cares not if I live or die It is fixed, blind & programmed to kill.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date: 9-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta First Place win Contest: Nature poems by Poet Underetaker

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Date: 3/16/2014 10:21:00 PM
Dr. Ram A very intense write about how nature can be destructive and cruel. Extremely powerful and truthful write. Thanks for the great comment on my What Am I poem.
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Date: 12/15/2013 6:31:00 PM
OK dark and descrutive write about nature all things a purpose for exsistence, all effects the eco chain, This write is true within concept but still it lacks hope and reason. but it is still it is well done. cheri and thank you for your comments on my new work cheri
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:50:00 PM
Nice win Dr Ram, It was nice to see you at the top...Roger
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Date: 12/14/2013 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your grand win friend Ram. Awesome poem. Have a nice day! cheers!!
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:44:00 PM
lovely win... PD
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:19:00 PM
Sometimes, Mother Nature can be just as brutal, as she is beautiful. You have expressed that very well here, Dr. Ram. Very good work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats, once again!
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Date: 12/13/2013 5:25:00 PM
Nature can be quite brutal sometimes, but it has to be that ay sometimes to keep a species from overpopulating. Great write and congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:32:00 PM
it can be harsh...but that is the key to its survival...congrats on the win
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:20:00 AM
We wee nature a little differently..It surely has its dark side. This is a powerful piece, Dr Ram, congrats to you. BG
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/13/2013 11:20:00 AM
make that see...lol
Date: 12/13/2013 11:05:00 AM
A wonderful poem, nature in the raw, beauty and cruelty, life and death, the struggle for survival all so well depicted in your poem. Congrats on your winning entry.
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Date: 12/13/2013 10:29:00 AM
This is such a unique theme for the nature contest! Well done, Dr. Ram !!
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:50:00 AM
stunning poem Ram I love it congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
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Date: 12/13/2013 8:41:00 AM
Dr.Mehta, you made me cry.Excellent poem.Thanks for the support rendered. (: ) Jenish.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/13/2013 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Jenish , having a poetic tender heart
Date: 12/10/2013 2:00:00 AM
This has been done very creatively! Individual lines and expressions are of great beauty, irrespective of this theme on nature. Leaves one thinking... Regards, Dr Mehta and thanks for reading my poem, and leaving your kind remarks.
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Date: 12/9/2013 3:47:00 PM
wow a close up look at a gnats life! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2013 2:31:00 PM
Telling it like it is, and it isn't pretty this nature of ours. For every beautiful flow there are that many violent forces of nature.
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Date: 12/9/2013 12:28:00 PM
Interesting contest entry..Great work that you have penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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