Get Your Premium Membership

Boundless As the Ocean Blue

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Image result for poetry is a puzzle

The puzzle of my hallow poetry all the words a jumble chaotic, formless, scrambled an uproar unfathomable. Deep are the caves perpetual I fall searching for words eternal poetry unfading and immortal. Endless as the stars that glow, and boundless as the ocean blue; in a shambles, in a muddle, until, the unveiling of the veil. Despite the cacophony, I search through the bedlam of words colliding. And then, an apocalypse epiphany the unfolding of a vision uncloaked it was hiding down deep within and now have spiraled up. Endless as the stars that glow, and boundless as the ocean blue; in a shambles, in a muddle, until, the unveiling of the veil. I write with a madness and a fever hysteria erupts in my mind my thoughts a whirlwind of ideas. Swirls of phrases multi-hued a kaleidoscope psychedelic on paper the pieces of my puzzle falling together everlasting and everlasting. Endless as the stars that glow, and boundless as the ocean blue; in a shambles, in a muddle, until, the unveiling of the veil. Endless as the stars that glow, and boundless as the ocean blue, ocean blue, ocean blue . . . _________________________ September 23, 2017 Poetry/Lyric/Boundless As The Ocean Blue Copyright Protected, ID 09- 942-100-23 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge 4 sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 10/2017 Fourth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2017 1:20:00 AM
Congratulations, BW on your win. A very nice lyric indeed.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2017 5:10:00 PM
Wonderful song Constance I enjoyed it thoroughly, by my count there were two words missing, so your placement reflects that, wonderful writing as per usual!
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
John Hamilton
Date: 9/30/2017 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for correcting word count, it is even more beautiful!
Date: 9/28/2017 4:56:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win BW
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2017 11:15:00 AM
Ah, the words all us poets can relate to when the madness hits us! Love this x
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2017 8:10:00 AM
Wow, Constance, I surely loved reading your amazing write! You have capture the emotions quite perfectly, and presented them straight to the readers heart! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 9:05:00 PM
Cool ending! Nice write, dear Constance!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 8:31:00 PM
Just beautiful.. delightful lyrics..a sure win!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 8:29:00 PM
So well written, BW ... the poetic flow is beautiful ...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 8:06:00 PM
Lovely emotive piece, love the flow :) my best for you in the contest xomo!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 7:59:00 PM
I just love this lyrical write Broken Wings. Beautifully written with such dazzling expression and artistry describing the poetic passion, pain and ecstasy of the emotional and mental process of creating poetry! An amazing poem with great imagery and content. Good luck in the contest :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2017 7:54:00 PM
Excellent Broken Wings. I enjoyed this very much :)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry