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The man rested his paddle carefully next to the bundle. My favorite time of day. Dusk. The light was soft, The water still as lakeside glass, insects skimming over touching, laying down a perfect parabola and then touching again. He still felt her kiss and touch on cheek and hand. He smiled at the bundle. Everything I need and more. Sometime back a ways, paddling easy in a light chop, he had forgotten to worry about it. What did doctors know. Resting, he had taken a cookie from the bundle and ate it, looking at each bite before. Dusk left him and the canoe went on, paddle easy, paddle strong, paddle easy, paddle strong. Surely, he had crossed it by now. And surely who gives a- His sudden laughter startled a Great Blue Heron. It flew up, its wings a miracle. The man let the canoe drift and looked to the beautiful darkening sky. He took another cookie from the bundle. I am ready. I am ready.

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Date: 2/11/2021 3:04:00 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Douglas~
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:37:00 AM
Are you from Canada or the USA? I’m originally from Northern Ontario but now live in Kelowna BC. I love the outdoors and in Canada we have plenty of it.
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Date: 9/24/2019 9:37:00 AM
An incredible image in my mind you have created... excitement, in a quiet waiting way.... regret is not here... it is the embrace of life... worth living. God Bless your days. Ann
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Date: 2/8/2018 8:25:00 PM
Magical setting... mysterious... there's so much more to the story you're not telling us, Douglas.
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Date: 1/3/2018 2:13:00 PM
Scary, sort of ...
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