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Ink's Pyramid of Peace Contest ~ July 12, 2026

Artwork by zdzislaw Beksinski 

 

Bound in Passion, To Death Succumbed: Beksinski

From the catastrophic calamity they could not hide
Frantically facing the fear of a fiery death,
   they cling together until their final breath.
Arm in arm; heart against heart...
   despite the impending tragedy, 
   determined never to be torn apart.
Love kept them side by side
Bodies stripped of flesh and still they clung
   in passion bound, to flames they had succumbed

Emotions run deep as I feel their suffering
  and agonizing pain that accompanied the couple
   who could not refrain from devotion, even near death
    embracing each other in their last moment together
     while being robbed of one more breath.

As smoke darked the sanguine sky,
   it was inevitable they were about to die
I imagined hearing her whisper...
  "Hold me in your arms so I cannot see
   death in the darkness as it approaches us
    as if it were night instead of day.
Kiss me when the sun sleeps."

Helpless to end her weeping,
  he swept her into his arms as hot embers
   rained down upon their bodies.
He held her tighter to his chest and cried,
 "Keep your fingers around my soul
   and know that our love will never grow old."

Painted as if lost in a nightmarish horror,
 they remained until the end of their existence
  insistent on holding each other tight
   but helpless to offer resistance...
    until death claimed them for its own
There was no pyramid to be found
 where they'd be safe from the profound hell
  that rained down around them.
Their only peace was that in each other's arms
 they would meet death together... entwined 

Centuries later, they would be found,
  limbs wound together in a profound way.
Like the ancient Pompeiian volcanic disaster
 where once lived a civilization of glory,
   that perished to death amid smoldering lava,
    bodies burned and buried in windswept ashes...
Escape was also impossible in that calamitous story.
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Your words come to life. Have a blessed day with your win, Paula...............
Lane Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:38 PM
Thanks a bunch, Paula.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:05 PM
I especially love! “ Hold me in your arms so I cannot see death in the darkness as it approaches us as if it were night instead of day” well how beautiful would that be? To be in your beloveds embrace when darkness clouds every little light or spark! 😢my heart! Hurts 😭 the depth of this! Made me feel so very deeply ~ so touching … the ending especially 😢 Well A fave! Congratulations on your top win! Nailed it! Sending you light always ~ ✨⭐🌙✨⭐
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Linnersz, my beautiful friend with a poetic heart that bleeds like no other, youv written such a profound and poignant and soulfully moving poem for the prompts! I cant even! And youv touched all the elements of the artwork! This artpiece is very close to my heart as it reminds me ~ and you did well! When one writes for a an artpiece it is very important to touch all the elements in the artpiece and not go beyond that! Ekphrasis is not as easy as it may seem! But you did so well!
Lane Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:15 PM
Many thanks my poetic sister for acknowledging my entry. Your plaudits are greatly appreciated. Hugs.🌹
Beaufort Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Lin, this is another remarkable and wonderful tribute. A sad way to end, but at least they were together and could comfort each other. What more is there really that taking care of the ones we love? You get to the essence of life. Sending smiles!!
Lane Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Yes, Duke. If there is any comfort in knowing that death has arrived, it's being able to spend those dying moments together. Such a sad thought to contemplate. Thank you for treading the Soup broth to read me.
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July 13, 2026 at 10:42 AM
Goshhhh Linnnn, the way you've painted this tragic yet timeless love saga, I'm just so beyond impressed and my heart is incredibly touched. The way their devotion to each other never ended, even when death came near and succumbed it all! You really did observe everything and beyond in that painting and that has really left me breathless.. hv been thinking of writing to the art for the contest, but yours has taken it to just another extraordinary level. I really felt "insistent on holding each other tight but helpless to offer resistance..." That line.. somehow shook my soul. And especially that ended, wrapped in ashes and ruins but still perfumed with love that feels historic! So achingly beautiful! And this sure is going in my favourites! Sending you light and best wishes always, hugzzzz
Lane Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 11:10 AM
Dear Hiya, I sincerely thank you for your kind words on my verses, but please... never allow anyone's poetry prevent you from writing your thoughts and emotions on any painting or subject. We each have our own unique style and yours always makes an impression on my heart/soul. I first saw this painting on a poem Ink posted and was taken with it to the point of wanting to know more. When she offered it in her current contest, I knew I had to write more about them than I did in a comment on her poem. I felt as if I was in anguish with them as certain death was falling upon them. You understood what my lines were feeling, as well as what I left untold. Merci!
Parker Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 7:27 PM
it's funny but as I was reading, I was thinking of Pompey and at the end of your poem you mentioned it...well done poet, I'm not sure how many are posting about the artwork, the picture was intense, I think most will post about the other prompts...
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Frederic. Your poetry has always appealed to me and I thinks it’s because we share the same feelings about many things.
Cunningham Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:27 PM
Being an artist you see what others don't. You've interpreted it so well. Good luck in the contest. Hope your weekend has gone well. Tom
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. Ink is using this painting from a poem she wrote a while back for her current contest. I felt anguished for them when I saw her poem and felt the need to detail what I see in that painting further. I hope it makes sense without having gone into too much depth. Very rainy weekend but it didn't stop us from celebrating Grace's 3rd birthday! She thinks she's a mermaid.
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