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Bottom of the Barrel

It is a bad place to be born, the first breath you breathe is drawn from dregs of scorn And you get rolled from day one, passed around like a bottle of rum Then they toss you to the curb, after emptying you when they’re done You age real quick where I come from, there’s always a full clip in an angry gun And the jails are always teeming with a can-I-bum another cigarette wasted bum You have a lot of idle time on your hands in the places where I became a star alum Learned a variety of skills that are not conducive to contributing positively to society Dennis wasn’t the only menace, believe me When you’re locked up in a cage, the only thing you dream about is roaming free Each day you fight to control the rage But in my conscious state, the things I most thought about was: What am I now, and who will I be? At the bottom of the barrel, those life changing things you can’t never see

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Date: 10/3/2017 12:10:00 AM
"there's always a full clip in an angry man". Amen. Good poem. Thanks for sharing................peace!
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Date: 9/28/2017 4:04:00 PM
Wherever this may be may God'as grace spare me and mine. This poem leaves me in a prayer it so expertly describes the despair one feels with life on the streets and the inevitable imprisonment it leads to. Great job.
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Date: 9/28/2017 10:11:00 AM
This is actually a powerful write about the sad realities of life, a great reflective post my friend..
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:55:00 PM
Wow...I love this one.
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Date: 9/27/2017 3:26:00 PM
I think th is is very clever writing, enjoyed reading it for sure
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