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Bottom Line

There was a woman of Rett who alas was constantly wet. She took a chance wore extra pants. But folks sat by her with regret.

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2016 6:11:00 PM

ha ha ha this is priceless Paul - Just found out I am going to be appearing on stage at our Gaiety theatre in November performing a couple of my poems - I will need 'tena ladies' lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2016 4:27:00 PM

:-) Am so excited it is a proper theatre with about 800 seating capacity - its all in aid of charity so I hope its a sell out:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/12/2016 11:00:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan--the Gaiety theatre, on stage! How wonderful, how exciting. Quality rises to the top, and that's where you are. I'm sooooo proud of you. *** Thank you for your kind comment about "Bottom Line"--a limerick that's, ah, all wet.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/11/2016 9:43:00 PM

Methinks she needs Depends because her incontinence depends on it! Cute poem Paul!:)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/11/2016 10:15:00 PM

Thanks, cheryl. It would be nice if someone would Pamper her just a little.

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/11/2016 9:19:00 PM

Limerick great, enjoyed greater ...

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/11/2016 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, Probir. I value and appreciate your comment.