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Bothersome Bedbugs

Basically,
     bashful
     brownish
     brazen
     bugs
     besotted
     by
     bubbling
     blood
     browse
     between 
     bedsheets…
     best
     brief:
     better
     banish
     before
     bedtime;
     beware
     body
     bites!

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Contest: Tautogram Poems
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Placed 3rd
© 26th October 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Deo Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 1:54 PM
A tautogram is what the Dr. Laughing ordered. Good night, don't let the BUGGERS bite. shalom, shalom. Thx Paul
Callus Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Thank you for the visit and the smile you elicited, Anil :) Peace & Blessings // paul
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November 7, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Fab! Congratulations on your win :-) x
Callus Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Best regards :) // paul
Horne Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:38 PM
yuck - i was literally cringing as i read this (had them once in a hotel bed on the Isle of Wight)
Callus Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Yours was definitely not a pleasant experience, Jack...gives me the shivers!! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Hi Paul, congratulations on your win - I really enjoyed this poem and it is so true, bed bugs are blood sucking terrorists! We have eventually moved and are in our new house which still needs some TLC until it becomes home. However, I am back on track after a two week absence from soup and have a lot of catching up to do. Hugs and warm regards, Jenny.
Callus Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:56 AM
So pleased to have you back, Jenny! Moving house can be both stressful and rewarding, depending on how one looks at it. I've been away from 1st Nov; now back again, and playing catching up! Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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November 3, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Well, this is different, Paul! Enjoyed your wonderfully alliterative poem and I see it won a contest, so let me add my congratulations. Hope you are doing well. Hugs, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Thank you, Carolyn. This was a fun poem which makes a change from the usual 'serious' ones. Have returned from a short break in Sicily...now I need another holiday to recuperate after all the running around! Hugs // paul
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November 3, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Brilliant ! Congrats on your win. Hugs
Callus Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thank you, Cecilia; what a pleasant surprise your visit has been:) Warm regards // paul
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October 31, 2019 at 4:44 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you lots, Anne-Lise :) Have a nice day! Hugs // paul
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October 30, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Eek,,, too, Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Paul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Eve. I didn't expect to be on the winners' list....I was sure these bedbugs would have frightened you away:) Hugs // paul
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October 30, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Eeks!
Callus Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Understandable :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Chiri Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:25 AM
Nice poem but nasty critters lol!;)
Callus Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Brenda. Let's banish the critters and just keep the poem :) Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Best wishes, Paul.. I do so like this poem Panagiota
Callus Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. Regards // paul
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October 27, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Creepy good. Makes me itch.
Callus Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Linda. Take care. Regards // paul
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October 27, 2019 at 5:53 AM
You are a master mind, my dear. I didn't know you could do so much with the letter b! ;) I'm amazed. Hugs
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Thank you, Eileen :) It is a pleasure to have you back; you've been missed. This was a fun poem..can't be serious all the time, can we!:) Hugs // paul
One Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:15 AM
Bravo, brilliant.....
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Thank you for your generosity, S-1...much appreciated. Regards // paul
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October 26, 2019 at 6:27 PM
wonderfully written, paul! best of luck in the contest! (saw a cartoon in the new yorker magazine of a mattress sitting by a curb with a note on it that said "one bedbug. keeps to himself," which i thought was hilarious...
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Thank you, Ilene. Your pleasant visit and cartoon provide me with a big smile of appreciation :) Best regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 2:52 PM
- ... sounds a bit nasty ... and big biting ... very well done by the letter B - Best wishes in the contest, Paul :) - Wish you a lovely weekend ... without bedbugs ...
Callus Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 5:10 PM
You are right, Anne-Lise; bedbugs can be nasty; luckily they never come to visit...they know they're not welcome. Have a lovely weekend...Hugs // paul
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October 26, 2019 at 2:27 PM
You described them well...good use of "B"..they sure bite..all the best, Paul.
Callus Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Eve herself started me off on this Alliteration poem...I spotted the word 'basically' in her contest explanation. Regards // paul
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October 26, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Oh my! Terribly well done! Have had those night terrors, nowhere near as much fun as this poem ;), Best for a win! xomo
Callus Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thank you, Maureen. We cannot be serious most of the time; fun light poetry can make a pleasant change :) Best regards // paul
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