For the "Trois par huit" contest by Andrea Dietrich
Both Shone Bright A lone pine upon icy incline wishing for its stardom to come true but knowing that wish did not contain pure value A silly wish but one never knows what thoughts do A bright star, shining alone in night saw pine and sparkled light both shone bright
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