Both of Us Got Away

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if ever i had two hours with you… or three, the vacancy of this quaint café and barren shores would be refilled with the pouring of pink- frosted air on our glass-window’s past; the multitude of disheveled suns ripping arms of surrender; raged midnights ending into carmine mornings; swallowed inches of stars turning into lyrics replayed. and what splendor to infect the whiteness or redness of seasons’ fingers wearing the pains and gains of many a porcelain days. then, to recall the sevens and nines of time’s scalpel cutting our names into crumpled paper: a departure of hearts traveling in different territories. we inched away, not because of lack for vows marked in deepest sands. but… by fate’s desire to cart you in a faraway land, while i.. i burned telephone lines hiding beneath the long distance of regrets… yearning for your comeback instead of stamped letters thousands of miles so removed from alleys where our arms used to walk, we side-tracked along with stooping songs that gently genuflected… if and when we meet again, two or three hours by time's grace, oh the fluttering of a thousand thoughts would not be enough to say you were the trunk that got away, and i was your last rose that lost its stem.
all rights reserved © ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, love lost from long distance relationship For Frank Herrera's Contest By: nette onclaud
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Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Don't you just hate when it's not meant to be! Nice write nette!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Thvia, nette
George   Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 3:13 AM
So packed with deep emotions, conveyed brilliantly, Nette. Number one in my book. Lainie
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April 2, 2011 at 12:50 AM
Wonderful Nette, it is always a privilege to read your awesome poems, this being no exception, i just love your 'Porcelain days' congrats. Harry
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April 1, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Great writing Nette. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 9:57 PM
Lovely nette. full of emotions and senses. many congrats dear friend.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Congrats Nette dear friend on your amazing win in Thvia's contest.. knew this one would be in the top ten luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv and happy weekend too..
George   Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Absolutely stunning, Nette. Breath-takingly beautiful. To my fav's. Lainie
Beck Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 11:29 AM
o m g when i compare this lovely flowing conceptual piece and my own entry I decide to wthdraw my crap.......but then I remember that I wrote this lovely flowing conceptual piece for you "to borrow" so I am going to remain a competitor ....best wishes Nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 2:58 PM
the fluttering telephone lines.. such an awesome line Nette my friend in this superb piece for the contest luv.. a stunning and stirring creation ..good luck in the contest.. luv your title dearie...
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Enjoyed reading this very descriptive, creative, and passionate work..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Your presence at my work was uplifting.Sara
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:31 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Nette. The best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Awesome poem, Nette. The line "hiding beneath the long distance of regrets" seems so profound. And there are many other beautiful lines. I don't think you will ever lose your stem, dear. Your type of beauty remains forever. I have been working on a poem for Paula's contest, but haven't finished it yet. Still, I'm enjoying reading other people's poetry. Great poem here, dear! Love, Carolyn
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