Both Come True Part 2 -- Come Through

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Here's another version of 'Both come true,' once again inspired by my good friend, Maureen Mcgreavy. ...

wish upon a star ... wish upon a shape ... instar butterfly ... comes through ...

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/13/2018 12:40:00 PM

Two green thumbs up! <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/15/2018 12:19:00 PM

sad face. soup mailed you. <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:30:00 PM

Glad you read this one, and that you have given it the thumb stamp of approval … Want you to know that I am on the verge of taking a long break from P.S. … May or may not be back. Will miss your wit, your verve, your caustic comments, your brilliance, and most of all … You. Best wishes, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2018 3:24:00 AM

I have seen both poems GW, a joy to read today my friend:-) I love to see poems inspired by the thoughts of others:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:28:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/12/2018 11:11:00 AM

This was the progression to beauty.. awesome! Come see me...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:28:00 PM

Thank you for the visit, L.M. Just want you to know that I am not ignoring your invitations. Rather, I am on the verge of taking a lengthy break from P.S., and am trying to wind things down. … The Muse seems to have bid me adieu for a stretch. So, best wishes, my friend, ~ gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/11/2018 2:33:00 PM

Love this part - I better go looking for part 1... Line xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:26:00 PM

Don't get lost now! … Just to let you know: I am about to take a lengthy break from P.S. … Just don't have the old inspiration anymore for whatever reason … And when it's gone, it's gone, I assure you. … So, here are my best wishes to you and to your husband, and a huge thank you for all of your support. ! ~ Gershon