Both Come True Part 2 -- Come Through

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gershon Wolf.


Here's another version of 'Both come true,' once again inspired by my good friend, Maureen Mcgreavy. ...

wish upon a star ...

  wish upon a shape ... instar
 
     butterfly ... comes through ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/13/2018 12:40:00 PM
Two green thumbs up! <3
Login to Reply
Pigeon Tart Avatar
Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/15/2018 12:19:00 PM
sad face. soup mailed you. <3
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:30:00 PM
Glad you read this one, and that you have given it the thumb stamp of approval … Want you to know that I am on the verge of taking a long break from P.S. … May or may not be back. Will miss your wit, your verve, your caustic comments, your brilliance, and most of all … You. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 7/13/2018 3:24:00 AM
I have seen both poems GW, a joy to read today my friend:-) I love to see poems inspired by the thoughts of others:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 7/12/2018 11:11:00 AM
This was the progression to beauty.. awesome! Come see me...
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:28:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, L.M. Just want you to know that I am not ignoring your invitations. Rather, I am on the verge of taking a lengthy break from P.S., and am trying to wind things down. … The Muse seems to have bid me adieu for a stretch. So, best wishes, my friend, ~ gershon
Date: 7/11/2018 2:33:00 PM
Love this part - I better go looking for part 1... Line xx
Login to Reply
Wolf Avatar
Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:26:00 PM
Don't get lost now! … Just to let you know: I am about to take a lengthy break from P.S. … Just don't have the old inspiration anymore for whatever reason … And when it's gone, it's gone, I assure you. … So, here are my best wishes to you and to your husband, and a huge thank you for all of your support. ! ~ Gershon
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad