Both came bare hands, but
Patience came bare hands,
But when left gave me a lot.
Rage too came bare hands,
But when left, plundered my pot,
Lifelong lessons duly taught.
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Tanka (Senryu + Couplet) |23.09.2025| life, patience, rage
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