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Botching For a Day

I had a dream There were glass picture shows floating down the James. For dimensional appendages danced along the shore. Strawberry faced creatures cried with laughter, as they pounced pocket ear receptors against the breaking currents. Scandals, diseases, non-profit organizations? Shrieking cries ricochet off the moon and head to the stars. "They have found us before we found them!" I hear the cries. I turn to face the children of nothing. My eyes begin to swell as their faces go blank. I'm not their Savior, today. I close my eyes, Surrender to the darkness, and yell "come with me!" "come with me."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Jenny. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jenny. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations Jenny on your worthy poem being featured this week, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jenny. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:22:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets..please continue to share your creative writes with us all ..as this delight tonight... enjoyed your poetry ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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