Borrowed Hours

Cries in the night
Echoing through the trees
Whispers carried by the wind
Men sit searching for reason
Thumbing through ancient stories
And borrowed hours
Longing
Conjuring feelings of relevance
Trying to rationalize 
The feeling of impotence
Of being a man
The moon comes but once a year
While tears fill the heart 
Of the restless soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 22, 2009 at 8:25 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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August 21, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Much for the reader to think about here. Good title. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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August 19, 2009 at 4:58 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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August 18, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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August 18, 2009 at 10:55 AM
Skyy, This is an interesting lyrical write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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August 17, 2009 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Skyy. Love Carol
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August 13, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Sad. Nicely written. Sara
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