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Borrowed Dreams

On a passing cloud there floats a dream
A silent prayer
The shape of bittersweet
Solitude by the reverie
Without a string
In the dead of night 
Overlapping universes
By the water's edge

How sweet it is
Borrowed bits of spirituality
Dreams are made of this
Mother Earth, my mortal muse
Matters of the heart
Music of my youth

Where have the years gone
When I close my eyes
Riding out the thunder storm
I dream a day I dream a night
However many

Time won’t wait
What if later never comes
Forever eternally
Infinity is now
A sun that never sets


(each line is a title of one of my poems)



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~MINDFULLY~ 2021

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on July 8, 2019 for contest COLLABORATION OF YOUR TITLES sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 2ND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcguire Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Congratulations Line!
Gauthier Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 8:52 AM
So well done, congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 2:58 AM
You did a great job collaborating your titles Line, although I like the entire poem I really like how you incorporated the last 5 lines. Congratulations on your win my dear friend. hugs Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Thank you so much, Charles. Most appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 10:29 PM
I like the way you sustained and maintained the dream theme of your titles, Line. Congrats on a well-deserved win in the contest. :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 12:07 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon. I must dream a lot.
Kiser Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Yes, "Infinity is now"; beautifully penned piece of observation.
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Thanks, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Craig Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:56 AM
This is so beautifully written. I think you have a real good chance of placing if not winning the contest. - Mike
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated vote of confidence, Michael. If I don't place, I'll be entering it in your contest. LOL
Krutsinger Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 3:06 AM
I liked this so well, and would have never realized it was titles of your poems if you had not mentioned it. Nicely done! Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 4:59 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Mchattie Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Very clever my friend. This is one hard contest. Good luck. Have a great day.
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 10:53 PM
It's a shot in the dark, we'll see what happens...! Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, David.
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