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Borne By Love

….. I . am . free . to go . where . breezes . take me, . free to be . at liberty, . my spirit . loosed . on the waters . to be borne of . the power neath . my strong timber, . take me where’er . you will, until the . air of the mistral . is spent and the . clouds bid me . cease … . your unfailing love has borne me aloft but without you by my side, I am …………. at the mercy of the depths ………………… by Bill Lindsay October 14th 2015 For the contest, Creative Layouts, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 10/28/2015 10:46:00 AM
Thank you all so much for your kind words; I didn't expect to even be placed in this one - just proves that you have to be in it to win it! Bless you all ;)
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:33:00 PM
WOW, I'm impressed. SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations! CayCay
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on top spot!.... Love everything about this stunning piece... Faving it!
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:14:00 AM
Bill, congrats on sailing to your win! Very, very creative!
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Date: 10/26/2015 7:30:00 AM
Oh this is just wonderful Bill. The beautiful shape of the ship and the depth of your words is outstanding and very impressive! Congratulations on your much deserved win!
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Date: 10/26/2015 4:13:00 AM
Bill, am honored to be on same place with you, superb description, sweet and what a passionate way you end this!! I surely like the lay-out kudos!!~ Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb first place win with this creative layout n wonderful poetry Bill!
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Date: 10/25/2015 8:18:00 PM
This is beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/25/2015 7:12:00 PM
Back to congratulate you for your excellent win in this contest, Bill. I knew the first time I read it that it would be on top of the podium! Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2015 6:18:00 PM
WOW......WOW.....That's all I can say Bill....congrats on the sell deserved top spot
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:55:00 PM
wow, this is right at the top of the number one poems where it belongs. Incredible how you did the sailboat!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful shape and poem, Bill.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Very creative Janice
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:01:00 PM
I just had to stop back to give you Kudos on this win. I knew it would be up there both creatively in word and shape!
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:57:00 PM
Wonderful sketch with words, Bill. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:24:00 PM
Top marks for this excellent shape, including its content, Bill. You ride the waves of creativity! Congrats on being placed first. // paul
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Date: 10/25/2015 11:32:00 AM
So creative Bill !! Many congrats on your tops spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:59:00 PM
I love your creative layout and the imagery in your words too, Bill. Very artistic! All the best for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 10/14/2015 11:12:00 PM
Wonderfully creative, Bill. Good luck in the contest.
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