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Premiere Contest WinnerBorne Bright On the Breeze

dandelion drift


               soft the seeds set sail windward ...


     next year's bright meadow







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Hi-Ku (3)" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

~ Poem of the Day ~  featured on PoetrySoup.com on May 26, 2019.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading this winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Belated congrats here. I had seen this a way while back!! Looking through winners to see what Brian likes!!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations, Gregory, on your Top Win for this wonderfully beautiful Haiku!!
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:40 AM
Congratulations on your totally deserving winner Gregory, the stuff dreams are made of, cheers David
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on your delightful POTD, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Many kind thanks, Line - blessings! :o) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Gorgeous! Saw some dandelion fields in Minnesota! Congrats on your win and POTD, Greg!
Barden Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Thank you so very much, Kim, I greatly appreciate the marvelous comments, and I'm so happy you liked it! :-) <3
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 6:23 AM
double congrats Greg!:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, thank you, Jan - I so appreciate it! Double blessings to you, friend! :-) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:40 PM
How wonderful Greg! Congratulations on POTD and your first placement in the contest. Excellent work! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Many kind thank you's, Connie, I so greatly appreciate your comments, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed my Haiku! Blessings! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:18 AM
A double congratulations to you, Greg, for your amazing Haiku so deservingly winning First Place in Dear Heart's contest and a POTD honor! Well done! Sandra <3 :)
Barden Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 1:11 PM
That's very kind of you, Sandra, and I so appreciate the wonderful comments, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Back to congratulate you again on this beautiful image painted by your pen. Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Thank you so very much, Eve, that's very kind! :-) <3
Proxenos Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations due Greg for your 1st place win and your POTD - a double win, and a great honour - blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Jennifer, I greatly appreciate your wonderful comments! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
La France Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Greg congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku and your POTD and I love the image too!
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Thank you so very much, Constance, I am honored and humbled ... this means a lot to me. Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Ashley Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 8:56 PM
You capture the essence of the dandelion's sailing seeds with delicate beauty, Gregory. Congratulations on your well-deserved and wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:35 PM
This is such a sweet comment, Susan, and I so appreciate your sincere and heartfelt kindness and comments - you are a shimmering star in the Poetry Soup heavens! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Wolf Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Simply as good as haikus get, my talented friend with the razor-sharp pen! Congrats on the contest win AND on POTD. Blessings, Gershon
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:34 PM
You are always so kind, Gershon, and this is one poetic fool who does not take it for granted! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Nicole Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 6:45 PM
I like the little hearts floating in this graphic. :) Dandelion's are viewed as either a flower or a weed. I will always see a flower. Wishes!! Congratulations Greg, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Oh, that's very kind of you to say, Brandy, and I thank you so much - blessings to you! :-) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 4:47 PM
A lovely vision Greg. Congratulations on POTD honors! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Many kind thank you's to you, Dear Connie - you're awesome! :-) <3
Duet Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Lovely...congrats on POTD, Greg. :D
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so very much, Carole - blessings! :-) <3
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Superb write Greg..congrats on poem of the day.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, I so appreciate it, my friend! Bless you! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:52 PM
ooh la la la. FANTASTIC and the picture, I just adore it. Congrats, my friend!
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea, that's very kind of you, Friend! :-) <3
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 1:25 PM
- Congratulations on the top 1st place in the contest and yours p.o.t.d., Gregory :) - Many "dandelion children", lovely :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - what a sweet comment! Blessings! :-) <3
Ravidas Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Perfect gold! The borne bright on the breeze bomb blows brains) Congrats, Gregory)
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM
You are very kind, Kurt, and I so appreciate it, my poet brother! Blessings! :-)
Wanter Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:27 AM
What a beautiful way to look at it! Congratulations.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so very much, Sunlite - I appreciate that! :-) <3
Awtry Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 9:36 AM
What a turn! Lovely. Congratulations!
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:29 PM
That's very kind of you, PS, thank you! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Beautiful verse, congratulations on POTD..
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Eve! :-) <3
Turner Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Greg. "Next year" around here it's more like next week! Dandelions are my nemesis. I work in my yard nearly everyday and I am forever digging them up with a hoe.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:28 PM
I have to agree with you Daniel, though it is a love-hate relationship for me, as I so adore their beauty and phases and hearty "personalities", (and a decent tea, when done right), but, oh, those roots!! Blessings, my friend! :-)
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