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Born: March 24, 1980 - Reverse

why don't they call
they usually call
today is his birthday
have they forgotten
they had a brother
was it so long ago
don't they care anymore
have they left us behind
has it come down to this
am I just getting old

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/12/2013 10:12:00 PM gosh, this must be on a winners list I failed to see yet. Good thing I am seeing your poem now. I really like it and I'm glad it made the winners' list. congratulations. GET some more poems up!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/12/2013 10:12:00 PM My mom missed it by one day. She is March 23. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/30/2013 6:03:00 PM wow that hurts I know, birthdays have always been a sore spot for me too [one's coming up grrrrrrrr] Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/29/2013 11:41:00 PM ohh, how poignant, tim... your lines move me so; what a darn great piece.... congrats with huggs!..:) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2013 11:12:00 AM Congrats on your win..Great work..Sara Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 8/28/2013 10:14:00 PM "I see you've won a contest with this one. Congratulations, my friend. Sad one, Tim. I know whose birthday you're referring to. Huggasmoochies. Licia :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/28/2013 9:22:00 AM Good morning Tim, i'm now seeing the reverse contest... I love it... now i see the meaning of the contest... I have many of these poems.. cheers... and hugs... always your fan Linda Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/28/2013 7:31:00 AM Enjoyed reading again, congrats on win. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/27/2013 9:48:00 PM Ive had occasion to feel this way...lol. Great poem. congrats. BG Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 8/27/2013 6:26:00 PM congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/27/2013 6:23:00 PM Congrats to you on your win. Morgan Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 8/27/2013 4:18:00 PM Oh...very nice......congratulations on your nice win Tim....we are never too old to enjoy birthdays! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/27/2013 3:42:00 PM It can hurt to be forgotten, no matter how old we are, no matter how it's read........up or down! A tender hearted poem, Tim !! Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 8/25/2013 8:00:00 PM Sure can relate to this one Tim! Excellent entry into the contest! Cheers, Jack Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/25/2013 7:13:00 AM Keep writing, you will remain forever young. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/24/2013 8:53:00 AM clever Tim oh so clever... Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/23/2013 6:47:00 AM Yes i do believe i remember this heartfelt beauty..and it sounds just as painful in reverse Tim. Login to Reply