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Born In the Slums

~Born In The Slums.~ She was born in the slums sixty three years ago by a mother out of wedlock delivered her all alone In an empty dirty corridor due to a mistake she committed one night out of lust, or maybe out of love, we will never know. New born first cry to freedom Mothers last cry from freedom New born first breath to live Mothers last breath to die Echoes of life and death In that empty room. A mother laying on the floor In a pool of blood, A new born attached loosely To the mothers last breath As her destiny short lived. Nobody to welcome that new born alive with no flowers no balloons no father nor a grandmother no doctor nor a nurse no bed not even sheets on the floor. No decor for a new born baby with no name alone nude no one to clean her up, yet that last link between mother and daughter a cord separating life from death. Rescued by that stranger living in the slums He carried her in his arms covering her fragile body with his shirt walked towards the church rang the bell and delivered her to the priest. Today she wrote; here i am today grown up and happily married with two children. Terry 16/1/2013

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Date: 1/31/2015 4:20:00 AM
Therese, , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2013 5:49:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write this evening. A wonderful write through a difficult life! Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2013 6:19:00 PM
Thank yo Debbie...you are so sweet with your beautiful comments.....i also read one of your daughters poetry..i think i understood that..hope i am right..as she passed by one of my poems......love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 1/14/2013 10:10:00 AM
Terry, a nice, but sad tale... with hope! Terry (on to part 2)
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Terry...I am happy you read part 2...but i still more to come..it is so nice of you...xoxo Terry
Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM
yes life can be hard, who deals the card? what is the cause, the ration, why should blindness be the nasty bar, one suffers in this fashion?
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Date: 1/10/2013 6:56:00 AM
Blind or not..we all suffer in this life.....we can just pray to be able to deal with our sufferings once they occur......Thank You Don......oxxo Terry
Date: 1/7/2013 9:00:00 PM
Girl; This is amazing. I on my way to part II. Thanks for sharing. Part II of ( A Man Stood ) is posted. Lucilla
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Lucilla......i will be writing more.......and reading your poems to.....Love Terry
Date: 1/7/2013 8:54:00 AM
I simply "love " your life stories ;} you have a Happy New Year Terry ; }
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:45:00 AM
Hi Debbie.....i will be honest ...some events in my poetry are real.....but about friends in my country during the war.....some also i passed through during the war of 16 years......very sad life i had......but i am great now living in Canada with my boyfriend of 43 years......Thank you for sharing.xoxoxo Terry Happy New Year to yo to.......
Date: 1/4/2013 5:53:00 PM
Wow! sad but beautiful, you have such a unique way Therese, your words are beautiful :)
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:42:00 AM
Thank You Kerry....love your comments...i will write more.......love xoxoxo Terry
Date: 1/4/2013 3:15:00 AM
An Odyssey of life, a drama who each one understands only in the degree We have lived it: FEW OF US. Those who have been through some similar events though, find in this poem a catharsis. Great writing, greater the feeling, superb the message! Thank you.
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.....i am so encouraged by my friends at the SoapPoetry.. that is why now i love what i am doing.....so nice of you love your commentsxoxo Terry

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