Born By Fire

Deep within the earth's crust
slowly over the centuries
it had gradually made it's way
finally it reached the light of day

Dull and round as big as a golf ball
it lay on the ground enduring rain
followed by wind and sunshine
slowly the outer skin came away

At last it was free yet still dull
a man picked it up excitement in his heart
he took it to a jeweller's for polishing
it was cut and shaped letting light in

Weighing 12 carats it was well acclaimed
as into gold it was set, an engagement ring
thus this stone born of fire and pressure
graced beauty's hand with its own beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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J.T. Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Youve painted the picture of how diamonds are born of pressurized carbon. Good read. - JT
Hamilton Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:28 AM
Ty JT nice to see you Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 7:59 AM
I even enjoyed reading this more the second time, I think yesterday I was a bit distracted. Is this a true story? Also I am glad you are feeling better.
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 8:16 AM
the thought came from a book by Wilbur Smith Rick ty Shadow x smile hug
Muitherero Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:22 AM
This has many meanings, however I love this interpretation. We have special abilities and the jeweller is a mentor who helps us hone our thing. Very nice!!
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:25 AM
yes it has Kennedy like the phoenix happy you enjoyed it ty Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 9:07 AM
This is very cool Shadow, I like it.
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:25 AM
ty Rick feeling a bit better today Shadow x smile hug
Eseke Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 2:16 PM
NICE WRITE Shdow,hope to see you drop by and comment on my poems.Thanks and bye for now
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:26 AM
hi Austin I enjoyed visiting your work ty for reading mine Shadow x smile hug
Melugin Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 9:42 PM
As this brilliant poem graced my heart! Shadow you shine!! chuck
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:30 AM
aw Chuck how sweet of you ty for enjoying Shadow x smile hug
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