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Born By Fire

Deep within the earth's crust slowly over the centuries it had gradually made it's way finally it reached the light of day Dull and round as big as a golf ball it lay on the ground enduring rain followed by wind and sunshine slowly the outer skin came away At last it was free yet still dull a man picked it up excitement in his heart he took it to a jeweller's for polishing it was cut and shaped letting light in Weighing 12 carats it was well acclaimed as into gold it was set, an engagement ring thus this stone born of fire and pressure graced beauty's hand with its own beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/12/2014 10:31:00 PM
Youve painted the picture of how diamonds are born of pressurized carbon. Good read. - JT
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2014 6:28:00 AM
Ty JT nice to see you Shadow x smile
Date: 1/12/2014 7:59:00 AM
I even enjoyed reading this more the second time, I think yesterday I was a bit distracted. Is this a true story? Also I am glad you are feeling better.
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Date: 1/12/2014 8:16:00 AM
the thought came from a book by Wilbur Smith Rick ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/12/2014 3:22:00 AM
This has many meanings, however I love this interpretation. We have special abilities and the jeweller is a mentor who helps us hone our thing. Very nice!!
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:25:00 AM
yes it has Kennedy like the phoenix happy you enjoyed it ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/10/2014 9:07:00 AM
This is very cool Shadow, I like it.
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:25:00 AM
ty Rick feeling a bit better today Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/9/2014 2:16:00 PM
NICE WRITE Shdow,hope to see you drop by and comment on my poems.Thanks and bye for now
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/12/2014 3:26:00 AM
hi Austin I enjoyed visiting your work ty for reading mine Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/8/2014 9:42:00 PM
As this brilliant poem graced my heart! Shadow you shine!! chuck
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/12/2014 3:30:00 AM
aw Chuck how sweet of you ty for enjoying Shadow x smile hug

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