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BORIS AND SOOSA

Soosa plans to go on a cycle ride, to a distant place, misty and wild where nature’s beauty could be seen the fog that could ensnare the eye. The teen girl was blissfully alone, rides through the chill in the air a strange sound made her groan, Turning around, she saw a boy there. Was shivering, with no woollen cloth, Soosa stopped and offered him a ride he said, “my home is not too far Soosa” she rides merrily, with him by her side. No words between them passed, until he quietly said,”Take a turn.” the mist around was thickening fast Soosa felt afraid and wanted to return. Breaking the lock, she started to drive, when she looked behind, he was gone sees, the two ends of the road decline, submerges to form a mountain pass. Scares, for the width was narrowing, was about to become a frozen girl. then a trembling sound was heard, Boris was there, with two fireballs. Soosa followed his instructions, the orange lights pierced the mist thinks, Boris is a divine intervention he helped her escape a life of twists. The light was dimming, her hope too, Boris whispered, “Open your eyes.” she was back home, joins her family blessed by Boris, her inner guide! *The shadow of a being always follows. It never overtakes. Here Boris is depicted as the shadow of Soosa. Her rescuer was she herself!

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Date: 8/10/2024 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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SJ Sangeetha
Date: 8/11/2024 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Beata for the encouraging words. Be blessed always.

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