Bored In Manhattan

Sidewalks are full of people, yet no eyes do mine meet;
Taxis, by the thousands, litter the city street;
The sun is blocked out by high-rises with business men in suits;
I am a lost and lonely cowboy, with no place to wear my boots.

I ride the subway from Soho, up to Central Park; 
In search of Mother Nature, pretending the pigeon is a lark;
Surrounded by millions – never have I felt so all alone;
I am bored of Manhattan and I hunger for my Western home.

I came looking for excitement; I came looking for a job;
I came looking for myself – now, I’m just lost among the mob;
Who knew that in Manhattan, with such diversity,
A simple, bumpkin cowboy would get bored with the big city?

I am bored of Manhattan, and all of its pretentiousness,
But I haven’t got the money to return to what I miss,
So, me and my guitar play songs in Times Square,
Drop some coin in my guitar case, so I can skedaddle out of here.


Written and posted 1/5/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/12/2016 12:09:00 AM
Joe - Yours of 5:56 PM yesterday. You are very welcome. Yes, it's fun to host contests. My new one is called "A Last Line Prompt" and I think you will do well should you decide to enter.
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:38:00 AM
Joe, :) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT LOVE~
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Joe Flach
Date: 1/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Skat. A little bit of SKAT LOVE is always nice to get. ;-)
Date: 1/6/2016 11:36:00 PM
Congrats.. LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:59:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. It's been a long time since I entered one of these P.S. contests. It's fun getting back at it again and seeing lots of old friends (not that the friends are old, but one's I am used to seeing around these parts).
Date: 1/6/2016 3:50:00 PM
Loved it Joe.....dropping coins in your guitar....clever...indeed
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:58:00 PM
Thanks, Judy. Sometimes a cowboys gotta do what a cowboy can do. Every bit of spare change helps. ;-)
Date: 1/6/2016 3:07:00 PM
Oh yes - very good... The composition of your poem is much appreciated, and thank you for entering. I am happy to award this an Honorable Mention.
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Julia. For some reason, my Soup Mail "reply" option is not working for me. I tried to thank you for the editorial suggestions you made on this one. I made the changes that you suggested. Thank you for the HM, but, more importantly, thank you for the inspiration through your contest. I appreciate the time and effort you put in to hosting a contest.
Date: 1/5/2016 2:21:00 PM
Very nice.. Good luck at the contest! Rahy
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Date: 1/5/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thanks, Rahy. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment.
Date: 1/5/2016 12:55:00 PM
Nice to see you here, Joe. The Best of Luck. SKAT
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Date: 1/5/2016 7:49:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT. I took about a 2 year hiatus from the Soup to start my own poetry blog - among a few other adventures. The blog is fun and exciting, but The Soup provides much more feedback and kinship. I may have to go through my vault and post a few more of them here. The few I posted today are fresh writes. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I do appreciate that.
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