Nette Onclaud Poet Jueju

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Borealis In Jade

Northern lights in vibrant shade
            
   Flaming like orbit of jade :
           
             Borealis....  nights cascade

          Cosmic trance   heavenly made!
 
     

       
         
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Contest: Form J- Jueju of Broken Wings
3/28/2017   www.howmanysyllables.com
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Jueju/qijue form - 7 syllable lines

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Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:09 PM Both the poem and visual combine to put the reader in a beautiful trance, Nette! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Kim Merryman April 3, 2017 at 12:11 PM An excellent descriptive Jueju, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:42 PM wow, an amazing Jueje, Nette.How goes it for you these days?

James Inman April 2, 2017 at 5:58 PM Beautiful Nette.

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:14 PM Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju and your image is amazing too~

Phyllis Babcock March 30, 2017 at 11:26 AM Lovely words for the awesome vision of the northern lights Net. love phyl

Lynn Marie March 28, 2017 at 2:48 AM Your lovely words truly do mirror the emotion of the magic that is the northern lights. A beautiful write nette :-) blessings xx

Doug Vinson March 27, 2017 at 8:40 PM Ooh - I can feel it - that bliss creation and magic-awakening! Great title, too, Nette. : ) The Aurora truly does things to us.

Frederic Parker March 27, 2017 at 3:47 PM have yet to see but your poem captures what I hope to feel when I do

Charlie Smith March 27, 2017 at 3:41 PM Lovely work Nette...

Chris Green March 27, 2017 at 3:39 PM This was gorgeous Nette, cosmic and colorful. I have never seen this phenomenon but hopefully someday.

Tim Smith March 27, 2017 at 3:07 PM A beauty of a sight nette

Jan Allison March 27, 2017 at 2:59 PM Absolutely stunning image and imagery Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2017 at 2:55 PM - A beautiful picture, Nette ... the one who experiencing the Northern Lights will never forget it - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 27, 2017 at 2:41 PM Lovely! Aurora Borealis one of my favourite things ;) good luck in contest! 7 from me...