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Northern lights in vibrant shade Flaming like orbit of jade : Borealis.... nights cascade Cosmic trance heavenly made! --------------------- Contest: Form J- Jueju of Broken Wings 3/28/2017 www.howmanysyllables.com ---------------------- Jueju/qijue form - 7 syllable lines

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2017 4:09:00 PM

Both the poem and visual combine to put the reader in a beautiful trance, Nette! Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/3/2017 12:11:00 PM

An excellent descriptive Jueju, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:42:00 PM

wow, an amazing Jueje, Nette.How goes it for you these days?

James Inman

Date: 4/2/2017 5:58:00 PM

Beautiful Nette.

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:14:00 PM

Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju and your image is amazing too~

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/30/2017 11:26:00 AM

Lovely words for the awesome vision of the northern lights Net. love phyl

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/28/2017 2:48:00 AM

Your lovely words truly do mirror the emotion of the magic that is the northern lights. A beautiful write nette :-) blessings xx

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/27/2017 8:40:00 PM

Ooh - I can feel it - that bliss creation and magic-awakening! Great title, too, Nette. : ) The Aurora truly does things to us.

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/27/2017 3:47:00 PM

have yet to see but your poem captures what I hope to feel when I do

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/27/2017 3:41:00 PM

Lovely work Nette...

Chris Green

Date: 3/27/2017 3:39:00 PM

This was gorgeous Nette, cosmic and colorful. I have never seen this phenomenon but hopefully someday.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/27/2017 3:07:00 PM

A beauty of a sight nette

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2017 2:59:00 PM

Absolutely stunning image and imagery Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2017 2:55:00 PM

- A beautiful picture, Nette ... the one who experiencing the Northern Lights will never forget it - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/27/2017 2:41:00 PM

Lovely! Aurora Borealis one of my favourite things ;) good luck in contest! 7 from me...