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Boozers - a Footle

Drink booze You lose Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 4 in Brian Strand's "Two Lines of Two Syllables" Contest - May 2011

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Date: 5/25/2011 7:59:00 PM
Nice going, Sarge. Congrats on a well written win. Ralphie
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Date: 5/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
Good advice..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Robert!
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:22:00 AM
A pleasure Friend! To see your success near the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:20:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your big win with this great write.
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:00:00 PM
ooh ...sounds like deja vu! great one Rob. congratulations to you
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:53:00 AM
I knew your footle would do well, Bob. Congratulations on your big win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, Bob
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your big win in Brian's contest with this super cool and clever piece luv.. once again we are sharing winners list.. so awesome.. enjoy my friend..
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:29:00 PM
Good verse. So true. thanks for your comment on my tomorrow poem. Love gf
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:30:00 PM
You sure do, a great write from a great poet, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:57:00 AM
ahhahaa, robert.. sounds like gambling too.. really smart! go for the win.. i likey, likey! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Bob. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:15:00 AM
Well said, Bob! Now you've mastered another poetry form. I've seen quite a few entries that aren't really footles, but you nailed it and gave a great message as well. Winning wishes coming your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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