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Boozers - a Footle

Drink booze

     You lose

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 4 in Brian Strand's "Two Lines of Two Syllables" Contest - May 2011

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/25/2011 7:59:00 PM

Nice going, Sarge. Congrats on a well written win. Ralphie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2011 2:38:00 PM

Good advice..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Bob. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Robert!

John Freeman

Date: 5/22/2011 9:22:00 AM

A pleasure Friend! To see your success near the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:20:00 AM

Congrats Robert on your big win with this great write.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/21/2011 5:00:00 PM

ooh ...sounds like deja vu! great one Rob. congratulations to you

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 10:53:00 AM

I knew your footle would do well, Bob. Congratulations on your big win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, Bob

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congrats Bob on your big win in Brian's contest with this super cool and clever piece luv.. once again we are sharing winners list.. so awesome.. enjoy my friend..

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 5/20/2011 8:29:00 PM

Good verse. So true. thanks for your comment on my tomorrow poem. Love gf

James Foulk

Date: 5/20/2011 12:30:00 PM

You sure do, a great write from a great poet, good luck in the contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2011 11:57:00 AM

ahhahaa, robert.. sounds like gambling too.. really smart! go for the win.. i likey, likey! :) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 11:20:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Bob. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 11:15:00 AM

Well said, Bob! Now you've mastered another poetry form. I've seen quite a few entries that aren't really footles, but you nailed it and gave a great message as well. Winning wishes coming your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn

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