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book store fantasy summer of 2010 i’m sipping coffee outside it’s 90 air conditioning feels great what a lazy day inspiration nil my writing pad remains blank but then she walks in five-six raven hair look to see if she’s alone yes no male appears she gives me the eye her face shames helen of troy my heart is racing should i make a play or will she wound my ego? i’m vulnerable my girl just dumped me vulnerable but desperate I decide to play no hesitation she arches those black eyebrows says “your place or mine?” wouldn’t you know it my cell-phone suddenly rings reality dings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/8/2010 5:11:00 PM
funny...better luck next time!
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:01:00 AM
lovely day dream....i do it sometimes...lol...^_^ v
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Date: 7/18/2010 5:59:00 PM
Good one! Dave. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:49:00 AM
hahaha. OH, so this is what a man is thinking when he sees a new woman he likes. I knew that of course!! hahaha. THis is awesome, Daver. Soupmail!
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Date: 7/18/2010 5:53:00 AM
Great daydream ....Good part of our anatomy is that place we can retreat to be our own person...Excellent work that got my attention and held it..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2010 12:25:00 PM
Buzz kill lol ring ring, this was a cretive piece of imagination at a book store..well I'm pretty sure her beauty itself gave you something to write on.. funny write, enjoyed...P.D.
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