Bonzai

There once was a real smelly hillbilly Got a case of bad breath from hot chili He breathed, and banzai You thought you might die He'd add curry powder willy-nilly

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Chris Green

Date: 6/17/2021 10:37:00 AM

Now I need a glass of milk. : ) Hot stuff my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/17/2021 6:13:00 AM

Funny one, Gershon. :-) Janice

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/17/2021 7:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/17/2021 3:06:00 AM

And he had flatulence willy-nilly, and it was a dilly, this smelly hillbilly! I could not control Trixie; she wrote this.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/17/2021 7:59:00 PM

Trixie wrote it. Tell her: She who smelt it dealt it, dear! That'll fix her wagon. :) Smiles, gw

Eve Roper

Date: 6/16/2021 10:34:00 PM

Hahaha.. great one, Gershon.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/16/2021 8:18:00 PM

Yuck! Gershon, Remind me to steer clear of that hillbillie. I enjoyed the read, my friend:-)Alexis

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/16/2021 8:00:00 PM

Whew! Sounds like some of the hillbillies I grew up with, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/17/2021 7:53:00 PM

Yup, and some that I've met along the highway of life. Hee-haw