Bonzai

There once was a real smelly hillbilly
Got a case of bad breath from hot chili
   He breathed, and banzai
   You thought you might die
He'd add curry powder willy-nilly
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June 17, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Now I need a glass of milk. : ) Hot stuff my friend.
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June 17, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Funny one, Gershon. :-) Janice
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June 17, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! :) gw
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June 17, 2021 at 3:06 AM
And he had flatulence willy-nilly, and it was a dilly, this smelly hillbilly! I could not control Trixie; she wrote this.
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 7:59 PM
Trixie wrote it. Tell her: She who smelt it dealt it, dear! That'll fix her wagon. :) Smiles, gw
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June 16, 2021 at 10:34 PM
Hahaha.. great one, Gershon.
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June 16, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Yuck! Gershon, Remind me to steer clear of that hillbillie. I enjoyed the read, my friend:-)Alexis
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June 16, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Whew! Sounds like some of the hillbillies I grew up with, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Yup, and some that I've met along the highway of life. Hee-haw
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