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Bonsai Tree

Volcanic clay soil Interwoven roots through rocks; Pruned limbs reach for sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/27/2009 11:36:00 PM
great imagery...thanks for your comments as well,much appreciated
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:31:00 PM
Nice muse, I like the forms of this tree.
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:51:00 PM
very lovely image! Laura :)
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:14:00 PM
I like the context, simple and very descriptive.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:46:00 PM
Loved the last line, a great haiku.
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:48:00 PM
These little darlings are so difficult to "grow" My brother has a magnificent Bonsai garden..but it takes up hours of him time. Im going to read this to him..he will love it. BG
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:35:00 AM
Great subject for a wonderful haiku!! ~
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Date: 4/13/2009 7:50:00 AM
I have a friend who is in a Bonsai club! They are so cool looking. Great haiku! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 7:40:00 AM
Nice Haiku. concentrated genius. Thanks for your congrats. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:36:00 AM
I like the sounds( of the combination of words) combined with images of this haiku, nice, Jim
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Date: 4/13/2009 1:31:00 AM
Nice one Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/12/2009 11:07:00 PM
Great description of the Bonsai, Raul. Their branches do seem to be reaching to the sun. Carolyn
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