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Bonsai Ninja

with each breath I invite inner peace
approaching with meditative intent

manicure scissors in one hand
zenlike harmony in my heart

a passion for recreating micro landscapes
it’s a labor of love aesthetics and patience

defoliation wiring clamping and grafting
tapering shaping with explicit precision

twisted branches gnarly roots
graceful symptoms of ageing

pruning windswept replicas 
of effortless poetry in motion



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on May 30, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE 11 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 4:45 AM
This is very clever Line. I would rank it higher. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Thank you, Connie. Most appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 9:54 PM
So lovely Line! You have really captured the spirit of the bonsai tree. Each bonsai is a unique sculpture molded with patience and restraint. Congratulations on your winning placement. Enjoyed this very much.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:52 PM
Thanks, Sam. Most appreciated.
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