Bonny Scotland

My tour made me really content
I was pleased with where I was being sent
        The Air Force said go
        I couldn't say no
so over to Scotland I went.

The tour could not have been better
I knew SHE was the one when I met her
        It really was strange
        How my whole life would change
cause I knew I would never forget her.

My time in Scotland I'll never forget
I've never been to a nicer place yet
        I bought home a wife
        she's the love of my life
so to Scotland I owe a great debt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:18 AM
You should emboss this and give it to your wife. I would. It is a fine tribute to her and you have my good wishes and the envy that comes from knowing that someone has found true love in this world. There seems to be so little these days. Thank you! Gerard.
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 8:59 PM
This is simply beautiful.
Devonshire Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 9:04 AM
All hail to a limerick master, Ralph! As for the Is She the One Contest, sometimes it takes judges a while to sort through entries and this contest had MANY, so Tavarus is probably trying to rank them now. Wishing you luck in that contest and hope you'll write a limerick for "Are You Bugged?" Love, Carolyn
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 12:48 PM
I never seen a country more beautiful either,and great is this poem:)C.C
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Ralph in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Hey congrats on your great win, Ralph. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Congrats Ralph on a super number one win again with this fine Limerick.. enjoy another top spot on this happy Sunday my friend... with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Glad to see you in the winning circle congrad's what a love story! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 4:24 AM
A Big congratulations from this Highlander to an Adopted Highlander. Awesome Limerick Ralph, and too my favs it goes. Many congrats on your win in John's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 10:48 PM
Witty, my man, witty. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Belt Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Awesome tribute to Scotland and the love of your life my friend.....Larry
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:24 PM
How cool, Ralph, the way you met your wife. So are using Scotland as a category for John's contest? LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 5:23 PM
very cute and witty poem!
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 2:27 PM
soup mail Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:07 AM
loved it, my mother came to Canada as a war bride from Scotland so I find this poem nostalgic.
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