Bonfire of the Varices

There  was once a young Madam from Paris 
Who liked to sun herself on the terrace
Her legs covered modestly
But not from hypocrisy, 
From her varices, she wanted to spare us.

For Jan's Limereick 11 Contest.

Saturday February 20th. 2016

~First Place ~
ALL YOURS(JUN 8) Poetry Contest
Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Those unsightly veins no one wants anyone to see. Sara
Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Good limerick, Suzanne! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Suz, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks Susan: I appreciate your visits. SuZ
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Suzanne, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Many thanks, Eve. Glad you enjoyed. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:36 PM
I recall this one and how much I liked it before, Suzanne. Congrats on your win.
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Andrea: Nothing makes your morning...like a win . Lovelya, SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:40 PM
haha, very good one!!!
Delaney Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea:.....for taking time to read and comment. Always valued. Best, SuZ
Callus Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Very witty, Suz:) I suppose that's why some people gradually change from minis, to midis, to maxis! gl in the contest. // paul
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Thanks Paul: Yes bring back the days of the minis. Oh to be twenty again. Hugs, SuZ
Onclaud Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 4:01 AM
ohh my, i fell off from my chair, suZ... we gals are truly vain, lol!... good one!..huggs
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Ha ha Nette: Hope you have picked yourself up by now. Had an enforced break from the Soup. Hubby not well and house cleaning for listing. No time for sunning on the terrace now. Loved, always. SuZ
Davey Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Thank the lady for me madam, saved us all! Cute and funny, I enjoyed it!
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Brian: Late to my replies but I enjoyed your humorous reply. Lol SuZ
Hicks Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:22 AM
As with your last limerick, I learned yet another new word, "varices" ... some people do have strange looking legs. Good one, Suzanne. I thought it was funny.
Delaney Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Ha ha Tim: More commonly referred to as varicose veins, or as my girlfriends say, "very close veins'. SuZ
Fairbrother Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Hi Suz, nice one and I fully understand why it be. Cheers Kev
Delaney Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Thanks Kevin: I am new to writing Limericks...so it is fun. Cheers, SuZ
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