Bonfire of the Varices

There  was once a young Madam from Paris 
Who liked to sun herself on the terrace
Her legs covered modestly
But not from hypocrisy, 
From her varices, she wanted to spare us.

For Jan's Limereick 11 Contest.

Saturday February 20th. 2016

~First Place ~
ALL YOURS(JUN 8) Poetry Contest
Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/13/2021 4:24:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Those unsightly veins no one wants anyone to see. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:29:00 PM
Good limerick, Suzanne! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:16:00 AM
Suz, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Susan: I appreciate your visits. SuZ
Date: 3/6/2016 8:33:00 PM
Suzanne, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:40:00 AM
Many thanks, Eve. Glad you enjoyed. SuZ
Date: 3/6/2016 7:36:00 PM
I recall this one and how much I liked it before, Suzanne. Congrats on your win.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Andrea: Nothing makes your morning...like a win . Lovelya, SuZ
Date: 2/21/2016 12:40:00 PM
haha, very good one!!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea:.....for taking time to read and comment. Always valued. Best, SuZ
Date: 2/21/2016 6:16:00 AM
Very witty, Suz:) I suppose that's why some people gradually change from minis, to midis, to maxis! gl in the contest. // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Paul: Yes bring back the days of the minis. Oh to be twenty again. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 2/21/2016 4:01:00 AM
ohh my, i fell off from my chair, suZ... we gals are truly vain, lol!... good one!..huggs
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:29:00 AM
Ha ha Nette: Hope you have picked yourself up by now. Had an enforced break from the Soup. Hubby not well and house cleaning for listing. No time for sunning on the terrace now. Loved, always. SuZ
Date: 2/21/2016 3:47:00 AM
Thank the lady for me madam, saved us all! Cute and funny, I enjoyed it!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/7/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Brian: Late to my replies but I enjoyed your humorous reply. Lol SuZ
Date: 2/21/2016 12:22:00 AM
As with your last limerick, I learned yet another new word, "varices" ... some people do have strange looking legs. Good one, Suzanne. I thought it was funny.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/21/2016 2:47:00 PM
Ha ha Tim: More commonly referred to as varicose veins, or as my girlfriends say, "very close veins'. SuZ
Date: 2/20/2016 10:44:00 PM
Hi Suz, nice one and I fully understand why it be. Cheers Kev
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/21/2016 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Kevin: I am new to writing Limericks...so it is fun. Cheers, SuZ
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