Bonfire

on a cold clear night
they huddle close together with 
    scorched fronts and icy backs  
eyes reflecting the flames in ruddy faces 
    woodsmoke permeating hair and clothes
fine grey ash coating eyelashes 

the huge fire consumes noisily
   above glowing red eyed coals 
racing tongues of flames blaze
   in hypnotic sinuous movement 
a flickering dance of orange gold yellow

a twister of smoke writhes upward
     into the night sky 
     dragging sparks like stars inside it 

the transfixing power of bonfire 
      a living breathing entity 
             dangerously thrilling 
the primal part of man watches in awe 




19 September 2022
Fall Flavours Poetry Contest 
Theme... Having a Bonfire 
Sponsor.. Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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