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Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Unseeking Seeker Date written: 06/30/2023

A revolving door of visiting friends Old and new, at the hospital, day by day. Stalked by death's brooding shadow; Cancer-stricken and terminally ill, Yet faces his mortality with courage. His bones ache yet his heart sings As he lay dying without regrets. A man of faith, he feels no fear As he embarks on his final destination. His journey from stunned denial to Acceptance of his fate, complete. What a life! He had a good run. Loved ones surround his death bed. His wife of more than half a century Keeps round the clock vigil. His bones ache yet his heart Coos along to her farewell song, Softly sung into his right ear. Hand in hand, a goodbye kiss on his brow. A stream of peacefulness flows Through the clearing of his mind As he slowly slips away; his bones Ache no more.

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Date: 8/9/2023 10:33:00 AM
A sad but beautiful reminder that one can pass in peace with no regrets. A fine work worthy of your win!
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Date: 7/29/2023 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful close to your mindful poem on passing with dignity and grace. Congratulations on the win! Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on a deserving 1st place. A truly memorable poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/4/2023 5:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, SV:-)
Date: 7/3/2023 9:39:00 AM
Great memorial song. Nice winner.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/4/2023 5:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jay:-)
Date: 7/1/2023 9:20:00 AM
Your poem takes me back to my beautiful Mum's passing. I didn't cry back then, because it was God's answer to prayers that she be spared any more pain, and her aching body could be granted peace. Its not a sad tale when loved ones are there, its just God's way of taking all aches and pain away. A lovely poem Edward. Not morbid, just told with wisdom and respect.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/1/2023 10:24:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, SV:-)
Date: 7/1/2023 4:58:00 AM
In the end what counts is love and he had plenty of that. No wealth can comfort as a beloved partner. Awesome reflection on how one feels counting final days, Edward. A FAVE.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/1/2023 7:34:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and the fave, Vijay:-) Most obliged.

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