Bones: a Utopian Dream

The dark poet
every word is a piece cut from a victim.
Every letter sliced into the body
Anger is filled in the aftermath,
because the poem is never perfect and 
he has to try again and again to get it
just right. 

He tried to construct a poem from 
human and animal insides
on a cork boarded wall in the basement 
of his house, spleens and other red 
things, calligraphy with precision
made of beautiful dark crimson-
It still wasn't right.

He tried then, to write on rice paper
With blue soaked gray matter.
The brain is very easy to mold into
letters.
It just did not give off the glitter 
he thought it deserved.

Then came skin, so malleable and pliant-
Thought his masterpiece was here-
until it dried and shriveled
In frustration he cried...

Why can't this be perfect?
"Must show the world the greatest
Masterpiece of all time!"

Then came the teeth, some baby
teeth, some rotten "old man" teeth.
Using squares and roots- he thought it
a hoot! Until the glue started to wear off from the paper...
Ahhh, another almost perfectly formed masterpiece!
Gone to the incinerator-
Traveling far and wide
town after town, donor after donor,
He was stuck in his own purgatory
with perfection obsessing his mind,
So excited he began to climb his 
way into his own wild ride! 
His art! A new start! Mind boggling-
Brain synapses switching and toggling.


Bones! Yes! beautiful and polished
This MUST work, oh how he wished.
So to work he began once again-
On his masterpiece of sin.

Slicing, dicing, distilling and boiling
off the skin was the hardest part,
Then to bleach, polish, heat and mold
every bone so perfect on a background
so bold!
Oh! the green moss backing, with perfect white letters,
It really couldn't get any better!
Accentuated here and there with a red blood splatter
and a hint of gold.

His poem, 900 words long, were to him
His beautiful and soulful song...
How many people died? Who cares!
He had his masterpiece with everyone to share.
Out into the world he ventured
With his masterpiece;
A Utopian adventure!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Thirtyseven Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Chilling words. Nice win.
A  Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Amy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
D. Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Hi Amy, nice win. Nate
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Irma is going to have her hands full selecting from these exceptional Dark Poet poems. The best to you in the contest Amy. Thank you for your kind comments on mine it means so much coming from you. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:34 PM
This rocks, Amy. One of the VERY Best for the contest. I saw only two others that I like as much as yours. Luv, andrea
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:32 PM
glup............glad it's not a poem about your own demons dear.....she's not getting mine...fret. Light & Love LIGHT & LOVE....LLIIGGHHTT & LLOOVVEE
Fooksss Aka Lynette C. Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:01 PM
WILD.HEHEE.THANKS GOOD L TO U TOO. bUfFy
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Well, sounds like some of those that I studied in forsenic science andthe teacher asked was this person insane...Well, go figure do normal people do this...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Delacroix Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:03 PM
I dont' know about utopian adventure, Amy, but the poem definitely describes well a dark poet. WOW! Quite a vivid description. Good luck in the contest. And thank you for all your great reviews and comments on my poem. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Caroline.
Taylor Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Eerie, gruesome and chilling. But what a composition. Fantastic write. Going to be hard to beat. Best luck in contest. xxx Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Exquisite write Amy.. unique and very original to present the dark side.. just saying "hi" to as many as I can today while sunning on the beach ... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Wow......icky yes....but a masterpiece yes....evil yes.....a winner....yes!!
Falotico Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Wel written Amy... nice flow
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:31 AM
An awesome depiction of the inner workings of a truly "dark poet," Amy. Their words can sting. Appropriately written with a very dark perspective on human nature. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn (And thanks for your kind thoughts. Soup Mail returned.)
Belt Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Great Write Amy now I gotta sleep with the lights on.....Good Luck......Larry
A   Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:42 AM
i mean, luck,.........he he
A   Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:37 AM
this is dark, good kuck,,wwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is awesome,..p.d.
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