Bone Beach

Sarcophagus emptied onto white sand.
Knucklebones tossed, like dice, with soul case smarts.
Where she’d end up, this burial unplanned.

Like grinding down teeth, time reclaims cast parts.
Connections to each bone release, unhinge.
Frightful corpse formerly the queen of hearts.

Basically, sand and more sand on the fringe.
This beach without a sea, this teen girl walks.
Upon an ascendant, fate will impinge.

As girl tries to leave sand advances, stalks.
Rattling upon the wind, this bone beach talks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Whoa!! Scary one. Must be for a Halloween write. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I enjoyed reading this one even though scary. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Glad you liked! Hugs ~ Kim
Hind Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 3:08 PM
Powerful writing, of course, I can expect no less, as this is what I've come to expect from you- very, very good work, Kim - <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 5:17 PM
xx Thank you, Paige!
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 12:21 PM
the beauty of this write is its scalding language yet done with subtle restraint...powerful, kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Thank you for a noteworthy comment, my friend!
mysore Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:54 AM
powerful write dear poet. I'll be back to congratulate.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Thriveni! Hugs
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:33 PM
You caught my attention with the opening lines and held me captive until the end! Great job! Good luck in the contest if you entered!
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:28 PM
You’re welcome and I sent you soup mail. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Yes, for the contest. Thank you, Karen! Gives me joy that you liked. Hugs
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