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Look at you , my young brother so alive like a sea-god with feet curling on waves, the reef drenching our boxers of summer with impish eyes grinning till noon cracks. I have a best buddy gentle as crests’ ebb; he’ll be a rocker like me when we grow up, chart- topper of wind-songs blowing the tides drooling cool rhythm ; fine lyrics I will supply. Trust me, your superman vows on bond’s warmth under lit stars, guitars and bonfire shall flame… now, if our folks can add a sister into this knit five of us beachcombers, can conquer the seas! Oil Paintings 1-2-3 any Poem form For Eve Roper’s Contest Visual #1 11/14/2015

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Date: 11/19/2015 12:04:00 PM
Once again, a great write Nette. Love shines out through all the lines. Congrats on your win! hugs!
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:43:00 PM
Wonderful composition. Regards, Bobby
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Date: 11/18/2015 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, i really enjoyed this well deserved win...:), jill
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:38:00 PM
So impressed by your unique take on this picture, Nette! It is so lovely when brothers can be buddies ... and wishing for a sister adds warmth to this inspired poem! ~ Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:39:00 AM
This is terrific story telling Nette. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 11/18/2015 3:19:00 AM
Every line is a pointer to your God given talent,the more I read your work the better I appreciate you. "I have a best buddy gentle as crests’ ebb; he’ll be a rocker like me when we grow up,";"and if a bully dares you , ill whack his neck..." ; these can not be said to be ordinary . The way you technically omitted " will" in:ill(will) whack his neck is so beautiful, I just love your style nette;...congrats on this wonderful work and win...hugs.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:49:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Nette, congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations nette on your win.Very well written.
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:53:00 PM
Outstanding write:) Congratulations on the well-deserve spot!
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:48:00 PM
well done, nette
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations Nette
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Date: 11/17/2015 5:55:00 PM
Such a delightful interpretation of the image many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:32:00 AM
This is really a very striking piece my very dear friend, Nette. A brilliant write indeed. A while ago, this beautiful painting caught my attention when I visited the contest nook but nothing conceived in my thought. But you did really great! Loving this so much my dear friend. So glad I came back here to read. All the best in the contest. Many hugs! Btw, sorry I wasn't able to go home last undas 'coz of sched at school. Hope next time dearest one. Miss you, love lots Leonora
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Date: 11/14/2015 10:09:00 AM
This poem is a mixture of fantasy, adventure and brotherly love, that flows off the tongue like syrup while leaving a sweet after taste....delicious!
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:37:00 AM
You portrayed the big brother as a truly loving and caring sibling. I love his innocent passion for life and family. I enjoyed the direction you took this - it is uplifting ... CayCay
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Date: 11/14/2015 6:30:00 AM
- Not written in ink ...... but, with love :) - A wonderful poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2015 5:35:00 AM
Intimate poem and a very insightful images on the topic, strong feelings and message penned just resonates in greatness! I'm impressed poetess as I miss my sibling!
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Date: 11/14/2015 5:23:00 AM
This spoke to me. I only have one brother and we are very close till now. Your hearty, eloquent poem is outstanding!
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