Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Boldly, He Came Closer

He flew to my warmth; moth to a flame
But I tamed the flames of my fire
when I felt the heat of his fingertips
Boldly, he came closer to kiss my lips
and his touch became the heat of desire

For a death, this moth was not to blame

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Bill Baker December 12, 2023 at 6:39 AM Where there's a spark, there's a fire, when it turns to desire things can get dire. Very engaging poetry, Lin. I could feel the passion. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Jerry Brotherton December 11, 2023 at 4:46 AM Such passion explodes in these words, Lin. A wonderful poem, my friend. Lin Lane December 11, 2023 at 4:55 AM Thank you very much, Jerry.

Hilda Greenhough December 10, 2023 at 6:55 PM Thanks for the great poem. Relationships can be difficult. You may want to stick with the pet moth. Lin Lane December 11, 2023 at 4:54 AM Lol. I think not, Hilda. Thanks for the fun comment.

Jan Allison December 10, 2023 at 3:28 PM ooh err what a passionate piece Lin .. and what a way to go lol:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane December 10, 2023 at 3:43 PM It turned out that way. Pleasure to have it pretty much write itself. Thanks Jan.

Paula Goldsmith December 10, 2023 at 10:41 AM I enjoyed your wonderful kiss/ passion write/great picture. A story in just six lines... Have a blessed day............... Lin Lane December 10, 2023 at 3:41 PM I’m so happy you saw the entire story in brevity.

Tom Cunningham December 10, 2023 at 8:11 AM What a way to go Lin, a lot of fire in a few lines. Tom Lin Lane December 10, 2023 at 8:32 AM No kidding, Tom. Thanks a bunch.

Deb M December 10, 2023 at 8:02 AM So Lovely Lin…..Debx Lin Lane December 10, 2023 at 8:32 AM Thanks so much, Deb.

Daniel Turner December 10, 2023 at 7:54 AM My kind of suicide! Very nice, Lin:) Lin Lane December 10, 2023 at 8:32 AM Death by passion. If you have to go, it would be worth it to die that way. Thanks, Danny ;-)