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Shapes, colors, and surfaces have long nature shone. Anthocyanin in plant sap gives blossoms their tone. All tones in the universe bear upon humankind. Waves and waterfalls etched them and mixed their shade. Convey the can as you scale the stage. Time-frozen iconographies suggest a swage. Plenty of vivid glass catches the glow. Irate particles romp on men's mental stow. The reflection turns into a textual kaleidoscope. Colored focal points require fewer scopes. An orchestra of renovated wedded couples. Flawless faith, hopeful person sees are ambles. Portrayed as intelligent, smooth, and vesicated Heartfelt, tribute, neologisms, and undefeated Breeze, arthropods, tomorrow existence. Immortal, everlasting, fluid, and uniqueness. I cross the means no less than six times each day. Shading hidden by business has changed our stay. Medication and nutritious food scoundrels sell in the media. Helping and executing purchaser lunacy mania. A softness showed two similar views, one on each side. The right eye sees truth while the left sees hatred. Genius is connecting light shards social joy and bliss He was imprisoned in an application's abyss. Intriguing gizmos enrapture an expansive client base. Fresh iOS and Android pimps are joining the robot race. Expertise has supplanted skill in this serene stream Rough labor, uniqueness, and prior heresy are extreme. All these are linked to the hues glass and kaleidoscope. Vision has shifted as a result of the modernity slope. A lively soul distinguishes a plasma from a flower. Portray our creation with the original god's power.
Written: August 20, 2021 August 2021 NA's Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Kaleidoscope Poetry Contest Judged : August 23, 2021

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Date: 9/2/2021 1:59:00 PM
Lasaad,wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Date: 9/2/2021 2:20:00 PM
Dear Constance, Thank you so much for reading and placing my poem, that's a big honor, and it means a lot to me. Have a blessed day, peace, and love.
Date: 8/30/2021 9:06:00 AM
A lively soul distinguishes a plasma from a flower. Portray our creation with the original god's power. Beautiful couplet. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/21/2021 9:55:00 AM
A cerebral read Lasaad, your grasp of the English language is quite astounding, I think the more intelligent we become, the more natures kaleidoscope will be corrupted and synthesised by man, weather this is progress or not, is irrelevant to the multinational hi/tech companies, once it sells, an outstanding poem, cheers David
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:06:00 PM
I know you mean well Lasaad but I regard myself as average, which is good enough for me, this is your poem, your creation, your page, I’m merely an observer, who enjoys reading and commenting on your work, cheers David
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:01:00 PM
I really appreciate your gracious words, David; your uplifting comments have given me the boost I needed, and I am very grateful. I cannot say that my language is flawless since we learn new things every day. This contest's subject was superbly chosen, and it relates to everything in my life and education. You remain the most beautiful and profound poet I know.
Date: 8/21/2021 9:44:00 AM
Great imagery and flow in your verse, Lasaad, good for a win.
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, your kind words are really motivating and appreciated.
Date: 8/21/2021 5:58:00 AM
Dazzling colors in symphony of charming words. All the best, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/21/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay. I appreciate your very kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 8/21/2021 1:21:00 AM
Brilliant writing. Lasaad. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, your kind words are always motivating to me and are appreciated. Blessings and a great weekend
Date: 8/20/2021 9:16:00 PM
This is a compelling masterpiece, so rich in beauty and imagery, portraying the kaleidoscope of our lives. Brilliant writing, Lasaad. Good luck in the contest, Evelyn :)
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Date: 8/21/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Evelyn, your kind words are so uplifting to me, and are really appreciate it, blessings and a great weekend

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