Boinking Bunny

Boinking Bunny

There once was a rabbit named Earl
He was always chasing the girls.
With a hop and a kick
He made his moves quick
Then, he’d fall on the ground, thump and twirl.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 8, 2010
Poetic form:  Limerick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 10, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Enjoyed it! Had me chuckling. I really like the title. Thanks for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comments. Karen
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March 10, 2010 at 10:51 AM
This one has genuine wit. I like it. You are versatile, to be sure. Thank you for your compliment. Regards, Gerard.
K. Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 1:58 AM
That sure is one bunny! Very fun limerick, enjoyed this Dane Ann :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Earl was some more rabbit..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 3:27 PM
a perfection of a limerick!!! Glad you liked Rocky..I missed the contest..I new I would cry writing the story. Rocky's asleep tonight on my bedroom floor on the sheep skin rug! He used to think it was his Mommie..knead and suck it. He knows he's not supposed to be in there BUT I'm going to let him. I'm off to teach a knitting glass..Tim & you might do good rengay?
Murphy Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 11:51 AM
THIS WAS FUNNY LOVED IT FALESHIA
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Shades of the Easter Bunny Dane Ann ..such a cutie Limerick... boing boing..luv... Linda-Marie..
Morris Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Quite funny, great limerick.........Jim
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March 9, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Hahaha, this is a cute visual and with a great title! LUv, andrea
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March 9, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Very funny, Liked this one a lot!
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