Boinking Bunny

Boinking Bunny There once was a rabbit named Earl He was always chasing the girls. With a hop and a kick He made his moves quick Then, he’d fall on the ground, thump and twirl. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 8, 2010 Poetic form: Limerick

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Date: 3/10/2010 2:18:00 PM

Enjoyed it! Had me chuckling. I really like the title. Thanks for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comments. Karen

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/10/2010 10:51:00 AM

This one has genuine wit. I like it. You are versatile, to be sure. Thank you for your compliment. Regards, Gerard.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/10/2010 1:58:00 AM

That sure is one bunny! Very fun limerick, enjoyed this Dane Ann :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2010 4:23:00 PM

Earl was some more rabbit..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/9/2010 3:27:00 PM

a perfection of a limerick!!! Glad you liked Rocky..I missed the contest..I new I would cry writing the story. Rocky's asleep tonight on my bedroom floor on the sheep skin rug! He used to think it was his Mommie..knead and suck it. He knows he's not supposed to be in there BUT I'm going to let him. I'm off to teach a knitting glass..Tim & you might do good rengay?

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/9/2010 11:51:00 AM

THIS WAS FUNNY LOVED IT FALESHIA